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關於論文摘要中翻英~做文法修飾(急)

以下是我論文摘要一些中翻英的翻譯~希望有好心人士可以幫我看一下文法對不對.幫我做修飾.以20點答謝.如覺不夠可以再增加點數答謝.摘要如下:

礦尾渣為工業煉製二氧化鈦的副產品,為顆粒細、氯含量高之酸性物質,原以加2倍水泥造粒製成觀音石,作為道路基底層級配料。

SCDS is a byproduct to refine titania of industry. It is a fine-textured and amount of chlorine ion acidic material. After mixing with 2-fold cement coagulated into TCS. Currently TCS is being adapted for pavement.

為避免觀音石內部氯離子釋出所可能造成的金屬管路腐蝕問題,本研究主要探討礦尾渣水洗除氯的程序、造粒的最佳配比、粒料的性質及CBR值等,評估取代觀音石及放寬使用限制之可行性。

Abstain the TCS’s chlorine ion stripping and rusty coherer pipeline . The experiment is aimed at SCDS water washing , the best cooprerate mixing with cement , aggregate attribute , C.B.R. development and evaluate a TCS fasibilty.

研究發現僅用清水清洗對礦尾渣內的氯離子去除量有一定極限,若使用5%碳酸鈉水溶液,才能增加礦尾渣內氯離子的溶出。利用壓濾機清洗可達到氯離子殘留量在500 ppm以下。

The result shows that the water washing SCDS can’t efficiently decrease chlorine ion . If use 5% soda ash washing and filter press equaiment can to low SCDS’s chlorine ion 500 ppm.

結果又發現試體的濕密度值為影響造粒強度的關鍵因素,當以水灰比0.4,水泥/濾餅比為 1.2或1.6造粒(簡稱KYC Ⅲ),養護7天的強度可達目標強度210 kgf/cm2。

Another result shows that the new TCS compressive strength act on wet density. The aggregate (KYCⅢ) compressive strength arrived 210 kgf/cm2 by 7day cure, w/c=0.4 and mixing with 1.2 or 1.6-fold cement .

KYC Ⅲ篩分析結果符合第二類型基層級配料要求,由CBR值顯示KYC Ⅲ經養護28天後,適用於道路基底層材料。

The KYCⅢ C.B.R. development can use pavement by 28 day cure.

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  • 1 0 年前
    最佳解答

    我已經盡力寫了,不好意思,把原文改了很多,希望有幫助。我的文法跟用詞是很OK的,因為我在國外唸書,但不是您的領域,如有其他慣用的term或verb,就要麻煩您再檢查一遍囉,最好再拿給你這個領域的學長姐或教授看一遍,應該就可以定稿了。

    另外提醒您:

    1.在文中第一次出現專有名詞時一定要先寫整個詞,再括號縮 寫,譬如the picture exchange communication system (PECS),隨後才能直接寫縮寫。

    2.當提及您的研究時,通常一律用過去式,因為研究已經完成。

    總之,拿給師長看的時候,絕對不要拿您的原稿,請用我這份。希望還有其他前輩能在網上給予指導。

    加油喔!先恭喜你是準碩士了耶~

    (此詞第一次出現必須的先寫出整個詞,不可以直接縮寫)_______ (SCDS) is a by-product made from industry of titania refinement. It is a fine-textured acidic substance which abounds with chlorine ion. The original use of SCDS is to transfer it to _________(TCS) for pavement by mixing it with the proportion of double amount of cement.

    (主題句必須畫龍點睛,因此直接由本研究目的開始寫) The purpose of the study was to examine if there was any alternative for TCS and determine the feasibility to use the alternative. In order to avoid the chlorine ion being released and resulting in rusty metal pipelines, the process of isolating chlorine ion from SCDS, the best proportion of SCDS and cement, and the value of _____(C.B.R.) were investigated.

    Result showed that the SCDS was still full of chlorine ion after being water-washed. Only if 5% soda ash was used could the chlorine ion be released from SCDS. Additionally, the use of filtering machine allowed the residual of chlorine ion in SCDS less than 500 ppm.

    Another finding was that the humidity and density were the determinants of strength for TCS. When being mixed with the proportion of 0.4 w/c and 1.2 or 1.6 cement (i.e., KYCⅢ) for 7 days, the strength of TCS could reach 210 kgf/cm2.

    參考資料: 我很用心地幫你修
  • Ti Ti
    Lv 4
    1 0 年前

    學術研究如能與產業結合,具有市場性,那真是恭喜未來功成名就機會大大增加。但你的研究如果對議題有新觀點的注入或分析方式,那就有貢獻了。你做的是研究,而不是"feasibility studies"。別在意那種"judge a book by its cover(abstract)"的評論。

    加油,口試順利。

  • En-Zen
    Lv 7
    1 0 年前

    這篇是論文的英文summary.論文寫作是非常嚴謹的。這一篇實在太長,要費很多時間。很可能被系統移除。翻了不是白忙嗎?

    目前知識 為了維持問答與搜尋品質,

    自 2005/6/1 起凡是要求翻譯的內容,如超過五行,

    將予以強制移除。

    系統這麼說。

    我翻一段給你參攷:

    礦尾渣為工業煉製二氧化鈦的副產品,為顆粒細、氯含量高之酸性物質,原以加2倍水泥造粒製成觀音石,作為道路基底層級配料。

    SCDS is a byproduct to refine titania of industry. It is a fine-textured and amount of chlorine ion acidic material. After mixing with 2-fold cement coagulated into TCS. Currently TCS is being adapted for pavement.

    SCDS (全文) is a byproduct of refining titanium dioxide in industry. It is a fine-textured acidic material with high content of chlorine. The recent application is to make TCS(全文)by mixing with two-fold cement and used as base material for foundation of road pavement.

    註:論文裏,除了通俗的簡寫外,第一次出現都要把全文寫清楚。所以我括弧讓你寫全文。你該用英文思考寫英文summary。

    參考資料: 洋工程博士,寫過英文論文、文献。
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