所以想請 英文達人/有寫過英文自傳 的朋友，幫我看一下我的自傳
My Chinese name is XXX, and my English name is XXX. I was born on October@, 19@@, in Pingtung. I am a considerate and thoughtful girl, always dealing with things with studious attitude. So my abilities and efforts were both approved. In my high school years, my grades were always amazing. Besides, I have ever joined the English contest of Diplomacy with my partners and won an award.
Through my family’s influence, I know my own life targets. I have a happy family and I love my family members. My parents are kind and patient, and they gave me good education so that now I am more understanding than others of the same age. To raise their children, my parents have worked so hard and always went gone home late. Since I was young, I have seen their efforts and decided to realize my ambition to give them a better life. I am really thankful for their upbringing.
English plays the most important part in my school life. I have been exposed to English since my fifth year in elementary school. I was attracted by those magical words on the blackboard. It was so interesting. Then I found I have already fallen in love with English. With the passion for English, I volunteered to be an English teacher throughout my junior high school years and I joined most English contests, too. Although I couldn’t get good grades in every contest, I was always willing to learn something from the failures.
In senior high school years, English became more and more difficult. At first, I couldn’t get used to it. But afterwards, I found my classmates keep finding their own ways to learn. It really inspired me.
Then to find out the proper way, I have tried again and again, and finally my English improved indeed. That made me understand: Constant dripping wears away the stone. .
Therefore, until now, I still keep searching for learning materials to make my English better, such as, English movies, English websites, Discovery, BBC, NPR, and so on. Of course, on meeting difficulties, I would immediately ask my classmates or teachers.
In the future, I want to be a writer, translator, or an employee in a foreigntrading company since I am very interested in English and I want to run deep into this field.
So I will develop my ability and tell myself must pass high level of GEPT, TOEFL, and TOEIC tests before I graduate from college. Also, I will go abroad to study and practice translating several novels.
I consider it important to choose what I am really interested in so that I wouldn’t get tired of my jobs years later.
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第三段："In senion.."+"Then to..."+Therefore,."這三個部分整理成四到五句。
第四段："In the future,.."+"So I..."+"I consider..."這三個部分也是整理成四到五句。