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匿名使用者 發問時間: 商業與財經工作與就業其他:工作與就業 · 1 0 年前

請教英文達人那位可幫小弟修改自傳及翻譯(中翻英)

我姓x、名xx,出生於台中縣清水鎮的一個普通家庭,家庭成員共七人,父親經營一家雜貨店,母親則是典型家庭主婦。我在家排行老四,上有兩兄一姊,下有一位弟弟,平時家裡的管教是父嚴母慈,雖然在嚴肅的家庭中長大,但也使我們變得更獨立自主,而不管我們做任何事父母都滿支持我們的決定,使我們更勇於嘗試不同新的事物。民國84年間進入萬能工專就讀應用電子系,期間呈擔任畢委會美術組組長,也擔任系上藍球隊隊長並為系上爭取許多榮譽。

退伍後因興趣所趨而進入樹樺電子擔任維修部門工程師,工作期間負責中央監控系統設備維護保養、更改中央監控軟體檢測功能及警報防搶系統的佈線整合,並確保空調系統設備供應順暢。在工作上更涉及到弱電系統工程,對於無線電對講機、公共天線、監視器、防盜器…等架設維修工作都有接觸到。在民國90年進入勝華科技公司擔任LCD產品開發工程師,雖然與之前的工作性質不同,但在主管帶領下與自己虛心的學習很快就得心應手,工作內容包含針對LCD液晶顯示器產品開發,而在開發案中如遇到客訴問題必需與客戶協助處理解決方案,來滿足客戶所需並爭取訂單。因在我的工作態度方面都秉持著認真做好每一件事的原則,一旦投入工作就會全力以赴,負責到底,要求自己發揮最高的效率以達到最佳水準,此外藉著工作與工作夥伴適時的互動,因使我的人際關係變的更廣闊,然而在這4年多來努力學習下與不斷的吸收有關液晶光學方面的知識,更充分運用在工作上,並在自己與夥伴的協助下,為公司在94年度創造100億左右的訂單,因自己的努力而受公司的肯定,所以在主管的推薦下代表部門參加公司所舉辦的課程『問題分析與解決能力提升』與『FMEA培訓課程』,參訓人員共計80人,合格人員共計32人,我也是合格人員之一。雖然我在目前的公司已有優良的表現,但我也相信能將此優秀的表現帶進貴公司,能為貴公司效力。而我也知道貴公司是一個國際性知名企業,若能到貴公司服務敬是我的榮幸,我將盡全力為貴公司忠實效命。

而限於篇幅,無法詳述個人在工作態度,操守品德,專業知識以及工作技能上之一些長處;請賜予進一步的面試機會來回答這些事情,若蒙青睞,不勝感激。

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  • 1 0 年前
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    My last name is X, and my given name is XX.(其實不用那麼複雜啦說My name is XXX就行了)I was born in Ching-Shaw town.There are seven people in my family:my parents,my sibilings and myself. I am the fourth eldest child in my family, I have two older brothers,one older sister, and one younger brother.My father owns a drugstore,and my mother is a tradition homemaker. In my family, my father plays the strict father role, and my mother plays the loving mother role.Although I grew up in a family with many strict rules, but it helped me become more independent. My parents are always supportive because of this, we are always willing to try new things. I wen to college in 19xx(我不知道如何把民國換算成西元,但是一般再做自傳時都是用西元喔), I majored in electronic science and technology. I was the presedient of the art club and the capatian of the basketball team. I did my best to give my department many glorious moments.After I finished my service in the army,I got a job at Shalarm professional security integration because it was my hobby. I worked there as a repairing enginner,I was in charge with the central alarm system's maintenance and testing it to make sure it works properly. When I worked there,I also worked with some low-voltage devices such as walkie-talkies,public antennas,monitors,and burglar alarm. I learned how to set them up and repair them. In 19xx,I started working at Wintex Corporation as an LCD engineer of production equipment. My job included the production of LCD equopment, and I was also in charge with customer service. I had to make sure when out clients had problems with our products, I could come up with a colution to solve their problems.Although this job was different from the previous one, but under the great leadership of my mangers,

    2007-07-21 21:56:51 補充:

    second part:

    2007-07-21 22:00:18 補充:

    I was able to do my job well. I always give my best and try my hardest and I also also very responsible when it comes to work.Also,I am very cooperative when it comes to team-work.I love working with people,it also helped me with my interpersonal relatuionships a lot.

    2007-07-21 22:04:58 補充:

    Over the past four years,I have been working hard and keep learning new knowledge about LCD. Because of my hard work and help from my team-mates, in 19xx I helped the company got around ten-billions of order forms.

    2007-07-21 22:06:16 補充:

    Because of that my managers voted for me to represent our department to attend the following events:"Increasing your problem analyzing and solving abilties" and "FEMA training course".

    2007-07-21 22:07:31 補充:

    There were eighty people who attended it, but only thirty-two people passed it, and I was one of them. Although I have an outstanding performance at the company that I am currently working at, but I believe that I will bring that outstanding performance into your company.

    2007-07-21 22:08:23 補充:

    I understand that your company is an internationally well-known company,so if I have the honour to work there, I would give my best to the company.

    2007-07-21 22:08:43 補充:

    Because of the length limits, I could not fully describe my professional knowledges,my working habits,etc; so please give me a chance to have an interview to allow me to demonstarte my knowledge. Thank you for your time and consideration.

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