Hello professor ××× :
My name is ×××, you can call me Annie. I come from Taiwan. I'm 21 years old. Now I study in ×× University of Music. My major is flute, and minor are piano and piccolo. This choice is selecting by me.
This year, I will apply to music of master .Because I think that it have many interest courses, which I want to learn in this territory. I have a strong interest to Flute. The dream I have that from past to now be always to study abroad to America, experience the American culture and music.
To fulfill this goal, I am in additional learning school teaches Music scope. I will also read some extracurricular flute books and attend some Music competitions. So I wish I can continue to go toward this road of music to stand down. In conclusion, I am a energetic, positive and optimistic student. Thank you for your reading and I hope thereafter you can understand me more.
I very admire you. I hope that I can become your student in future. Do I have opportunity? What method? Can you give me some suggests? But I can't go to scene examination. Just send my CD.
- jinlinLv 41 0 年前最佳解答
I 'm xxx from Taiwan, you can call me Annie for short. I'm presently
21 years old and currently a student of xxx University taking up Music.
I'm majoring in Flute with piano and piccolo as minors at the same time.
The interest in music urges me to take up master's degree for further
enhancement and in this way, I can get more acquainted to other courses
related to music. However, to pursue study abroad has been always
my dream especially if I would be able to go to the United States .
Aside from being energetic and optimistic, I 'm also enthisiastic .
I'm not only a teacher in Music couse in a training school , I also
read other related informations and reading materials in my spare time .
Music competitions are also places where I go as well.
Your famous name in the world of flute admires me and your dedicaton
in this field as well. I hope that I can have the opportunity to be your
student. Please advice me regarding this matter. And since I can't
personally attend the examination I would like to send a CD as substitute,
will this affect my admission? How about TOEFL? Please let me know.
In the future. if I encounter any problems with my application, Can I
have the privelege to make any further understanding with you?
Thank you very much .
- PirateLv 51 0 年前
寫信給教授，請不要用Hello, 用Dear Professor xxx較好，因為這不是平常在校園遇到，要asatsu的场合。
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- 1 0 年前
我試試看< 因為讀了一下你的原文, 有些地方不太懂你要表達的意思, 若離題了, 請見諒囉
Good day, Professor ××× :
My name is ××× or Annie. I'm from Taiwan and 21 years old. I am energetic, positive and optimistic. Currently I am a student in Music Dept of ×× University. My major is Flute, and two other minors are piano and piccolo.
This year, I'd like to apply for higher degree in Music because there are more attracting and interesting courses which I eager to learn in this field. I feel enthusiastic when it comes to Flute. I am taking additional courses in teaching Music scope. Beside school studies, I also read extracurricular flute books and attend more Music competitions. Turning myself into professional in music has been my dream and I certainly believe studying abroad in the United States would be the key toward that dream.
I'd like to take this opportunity not only to introduce myself and my purpose of this letter, but also more important is to receive your approval whether I am qualified for studying at your school or not.
I do respect any of your opinions and hope that I will become one of your students in near future. Unfortunately I am not able to take any interview in person at this moment but I am sending my CD with this letter. I am confident to say that no regret will come after your positive decision. Please accept my many thanks for everything.
I am looking forward to the opportunity of the admittance