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幫我改一下句子 關於時式的 拜託 很急著要

下面短文的時式用錯了 請幫我將它改正 有1.2句可能不用改時式。為什麼?

It is a sunny day today. My family decides to go on a picnic. First, we decide where to go. My brother and I want to go to a theme park, but that is not a good place for picnic. Mom and Dad have a better idea. They think that Seven-Star Mountain has a wonderful view, and it is a great place for hiking, too. Therefore, we decide to go there. Then, the next thing is to get ready for the picnic. We prepare some snacks, fruits, and water. After that, we put on T-shirts, jeans, and sports shoes. Finally, we put everything we need in the car and start our trip.

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  • Kieve
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    1 0 年前
    最佳解答

    It is a sunny day today. (今天還沒結束,所以還是現在式)

    My family decides to go on a picnic. (用 decided,因為已做了決定所以是過去式)

    First, wedecide where to go. (用 decided,因為已做了決定所以是過去式)

    My brother and I want to go to a theme park, (用 wanted,因為已發生過所以是過去式)

    butthat is not a good place for picnic. (那個地方現在還是不好,所以是現在式)

    Mom and Dad have a better idea.(用 had,因為是過去發生過了)

    They think that Seven-Star Mountain has a wonderful view, and it is agreat place for hiking, too. (用 thought 還有 it is 改成 would be,因為是敘述過去的想法所以用過去式)

    Therefore, we decide to go there. (用 decided,因為已做了決定所以是過去式)

    Then,the next thing is to get ready for the picnic. (用was,因為是已發生過的事)

    We prepare some snacks,fruits, and water. (用 prepared,因為是已發生過的事)

    After that, we put on T-shirts, jeans, and sportsshoes. (沒問題)

    Finally, we put everything we need in the car and start our trip. (用 started,因為是已發生的事;need 當成動詞就要改成 needed,如果當成形容詞就不用改)

    Hope this helps...

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  • 1 0 年前

    Today is sunny day.

    All of family plan to have a picnic.

    Firstly, we decide the location.

    My brother suggests to go to "Theme Park".

    But Theme Park is not good choice for picnic.

    Finally, we all agree Mom and Dad's idea to go to Seven-Star Moutain, where has nice view for hiking.

    And then, we all are under preparation for picnic.

    With snack, fruits and water, and put on T-shirts, Jeans and sporting shoes, we all go on this picnic with car.

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