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文章:As media globalization dominates the media field almost every programme has both a local and an international context. Therefore not only people within the nation will consume it, but other people all over the world as well. Some famous and globally recognised company will have their channels or stations in every country. Conversely if there are too many overseas programmes, they may cause people to be influenced by other cultures who may then forget and neglect about their own. Also exceeding amount of foreign-made products will change a country’s characteristics and their own distinctness. In another point of view this also brought foreign cultures to the people; it can attract locals or foreigners. In this case there will be audiences all over the world, for instance, television channels Disney. Disney is a well-known production firm; everyone in the world knows it. It attracts millions audiences worldwide. No matter where one goes this channel will always be on the television. This influence will create global audiences, which means the audiences are from all over the world. Since they all consume and participate in the same information, they are universally joined in the view of mass media. This closeness can be interpreted as a “global village” (McLuhan 1964).

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  • 1 0 年前
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    As media globalization dominates the media field, almost every programme has both a local and an international "story behing". Therefore"," not only people in the nation will "be curious about" it, but (other) people all over the world as well. Some famous and globally recognised "corporations" will have their channels or stations in every country. "However", if there are too many overseas programmes, they may cause people to be influenced by other cultures who may end up forgetting and neglecting about their own. Also exceeding amount of foreign-made products will change a country’s "features" and their own distinctness. In another point of view"," "it" also "brings" foreign cultures to the people, which it might be, attract "the" locals and "the" foreigners. In this case there will be audiences all over the world, for instance "Disney Channel". Disney is a well-known production firm (everyone in the world knows it). It attracts millions "of" audiences worldwide. No matter "where you may be on this earth", "when you trun on the TV, you'll find it". This influence will create "global audiences"(加標點符號會比較好), which means the audiences "comes" from all over the world. Since they all consume and participate in the same information, they are universally joined in the view of mass media. This closeness can be interpreted as a “global village” (McLuhan 1964).

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    1 0 年前

    1.As media globalization dominates the media field, , (加逗點)

    2.…to be influenced by other cultures, (加逗點) who may then

    3.It attracts millions of (加上) audiences worldwide.

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