慧妍 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 1 0 年前

英文面試 文法對嗎 二

Why are you wanted to enter our company? What do you want to learn from our company?

I know your company is a middle scale commercial agent. Often this kind of company couldn’t be bankruptcy. I want to work for a long time and the middle scale company has great corporate welfare and it could let me be responsible for an important task. I could work more affection.

What is your goal in the future? And what is the most important ideal you keep?

I think learning foreign language is really functional. So in near goal, I still want to learn English and pass intermediate GEPT. The middle goal I want to learn Japanese and get third JEPT’s certificate. I keep the most important ideal is Practice makes perfect. When I disappoint the ideal push me to try again and again. Just like the move of Ratatouille said anyone could cook. The ideal always give me hope.

How much money do you accept your salary and why you worth it?

I accept twenty three thousand salaries.

My house just next to the company time is money and I couldn’t be late in work. I could work overtime no matter sunny or rainy; both of us don’t need to worry about my safe.

已更新項目:

我可以更有效率的工作

學習英文是很實用的 所以在短程目標我想學好英文並通過全民英檢中級

下一個目標則是學習日文並拿到三級檢定

我的信念是勤能補拙 在我沮喪的時候 這信念可以使我有動力一再努力 就像料理鼠王說的每個人都可以煮菜 這個信念總是給我希望

我期望的薪資是兩萬三千元

因為我家住的很近 我可以加班而不需要擔心我的安全

2 個已更新項目:

我知道有點不合邏輯 可是因為只能講三分鐘 所以.. .. ..

不好意思.. .. ..

2 個解答

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  • 1 0 年前
    最佳解答

    1.應該是why do you wanted/want to enter our company?

    2.I could work more affection???完全不明白

    3.用able代替could

    4.functional?!多功能?useful會比較貼切

    5.near goal, middle goal絕對不行。應該用present goal, future goal/next goal

    5.I would prefer...會比較有禮貌

    6.你沒有回答為甚麼你值得那么價錢。住的近,可以加班不代表你值得那個價錢啊...

    第一段算ok的,下面的文法開始很亂,出現些奇怪的比喻。

    很難幫你修改因為沒有中文,不大確定你想表達什么。

    參考資料: 自己...我正在美國大學讀書
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    1 0 年前

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