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Have you ever been sad, and you also think nobody can help you? Don't be sorrowful! God never shuts one door but he opens another. Beethoven was the greatest composer on history. He lost his hearing, yet he never gave up.His compositions are famous in the world.Helen Keller was blind and deaf, but she... 顯示更多 Have you ever been sad, and you also think nobody can help you?
Don't be sorrowful! God never shuts one door but he opens another.
Beethoven was the greatest composer on history. He lost his hearing,
yet he never gave up.His compositions are famous in the world.Helen
Keller was blind and deaf, but she worked hard and helped many people.
She encouraged many people who has disabled.
Beethoven and Helen keller didn't give up. Though they were cripple,
they didn't depressed. We have to follow their steps. The road of the life is
very indirect, but there are many roads that you can choose. We have to
appreciate God because he gives us many challenge to learn.
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