sunny 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 1 0 年前

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Have you ever been sad, and you also think nobody can help you?

Don't be sorrowful! God never shuts one door but he opens another.

Beethoven was the greatest composer on history. He lost his hearing,

yet he never gave up.His compositions are famous in the world.Helen

Keller was blind and deaf, but she worked hard and helped many people.

She encouraged many people who has disabled.

Beethoven and Helen keller didn't give up. Though they were cripple,

they didn't depressed. We have to follow their steps. The road of the life is

very indirect, but there are many roads that you can choose. We have to

appreciate God because he gives us many challenge to learn.

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  • 1 0 年前
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    Have you ever been sad, or you thought nobody can help you?

    Don't be sorrow ! God never shuts one door bu he opens another.

    Beethoven was the greatest composer on history.He lost his hearing, yet never gave up.

    Hes compositions are famous all over the world.

    Helen Keller was bline and deaf but she worked hard and helped many people walking out from

    the dark.

    She encouraged many people who is disabled.

    Beethoven and Helen keller didn't give up.

    Though they were cripple,they weren't depressed.

    We have to follow their steps.

    The road of the life is very indirect, but there many ways that you can choose.

    We have to appreciate God because of lots of challenge he gives us.

    2007-08-24 11:23:01 補充:

    第二行

    Don't be sorrow ! God never shuts one door bu he opens another.

    be 可用 feel 代換

    解釋:sorrowful 用來形容事物,EX: ㄧ部令人傷心的故事 = a sorrful story

    2007-08-24 11:23:54 補充:

    but 少打一個t (sorry)

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  • 1 0 年前

    Have you ever been sad and thought no one could help you?

    Don't be sorrowful! God never shuts one door without opens another.

    Beethoven was the greatest composer in the history.

    He lost his hearing yet, never gave up. His compositions are famous in the world. Helen Keller was blind and deaf but she worked hard and helped many people. She encouraged many people who were disabled.

    Beethoven and Helen Keller didn't give up though they were crippled.

    They were not depressed. We have to follow their steps. The road of lives are crooked but there are many roads that you can choose. We have to appreciate God because he gives us many great lessons to learn through challenges.

    p.s. 1. His compositions are famous in the wrold.

    (His compositions are well known over the world even until today.)

    p.s 2. It seems you had put a lot of effort into this article before you post

    it. Very easy to do editing. You have done a good job already.

    God Bless,

    pcw-zion

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  • 1 0 年前

    Have you ever been sad, thinking nobody can help you?

    Don't be sorrowful. When God shuts one door, he always opens another.

    Beethoven was the greatest composer in history.

    She encouraged many disabled people.

    They may be crippled but not depressed.

    Let's learn from them. (取代We have to follow their steps)

    The road of life is winding but full of options.

    Be grateful to God for the challenges he gives for us to learn from.

    2007-08-24 15:25:11 補充:

    第一句亦可改寫成:

    Have you ever been sad and thinking nobody can help you?

    用對等連接詞 and 取代原來分詞構句的寫法,比較簡明易懂

    Sorrow是名詞,不是形容詞喔!

    所以應該是 Don't be sorrowful

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