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請幫我確認文法是否有誤

I have many happy memories in differant countries .

In different places you can learn about other cultures .

i believe that going to a new places , you will never forget what you have been happen there .

There're many places that are very special and fantastic , so my dream is to "travel the world".

My special experience was the first time i go to france .

The most special places is the Eiffel Tower it's very magnificent .

And i went up to the second floor when i look down "Wow" i said , you can't believe that how beautiful that it is .

At the night the Eiffel Tower will be shining for ten minutes .

If there's any chance i would like to go to france again.

Traveling in different places made me excited .

The most beautiful architecture i've seen is the Big Ben.

Before i went to london i thought Big Ben is just a clock .

But when i visit there i knew i'm wrong, because Big Ben is a big castle.

It is over 100 years old now amd it's almost 100M tall.

I've seen a Big Red bridge it's "Golden Gates Bridge" .

The color is beautiful ang the bridge is huge.

This is the first time that i see a so special color's bridge.

the bridge is long it's almost 3KM and under it you can see the golden Gate Strait.

I think that everyone should visit other countries .

You can learn more words and how others live .

That will be a very good experince to go to a new places .

And you can discover many sapecial things .

Take a chance to go to another places it will be a good try.

因為我的英文文法很爛 ,, 想請各位幫忙我檢查一下

如果句子不順的話 麻煩你們幫我他做修改

真的很需要大家的幫忙 因為這是要演講的

我寫完了 但是我怕文法錯一堆 所以 想請各位幫忙看一下

補充問題 :

可以幫我用這兩個字造句嗎 ?

我都一直想不到 真的麻煩各位了

1. force / liquid

2.form/conditions

3 個解答

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  • Zippi
    Lv 7
    1 0 年前
    最佳解答

    因為有字數限制我從頭把錯誤或不妥之處改正

    1.differant (X) >>> different (O)

    2.that going >>> by going

    3.forget what you have been happen (X) >> what has happened to you

    4.travel the world (O0 >> travel around the world

    5.the first time i go to france (X) >> the first time I went to France

    6.most special places (X) >> most special place

    7.the Eiffel Tower it's very magnificent (X) >> the magnificent Eiffel Tower

    8.second floor when (X) >>> second floor, when

    9.At the night (X) >>> At night

    10.france (X) >>> France

    11.when i visit there (X) >> when I visited there

    12.i knew i'm wrong (X) >> I knew I was wrong

    13.amd it's almost 100M tall (X) >> and it's almost 100M tall

    14.The color is beautiful ang (X) >> The color is beautiful and

    15.that i see a so special color's bridge (X) >> that I’ve seen a bridge with so special a color

    16.the bridge is long it's almost 3KM (X) >> the bridge is about 3km long

    17.many sapecial things (X) >> many special things

    18.another places (X) >> another place

    造句

    1. force / liquid

    The miners used pumps to force liquids out of grimy ponds.

    2.form/conditions

    Conditions will be formed to deal with problems between labor and management.

    2007-08-25 11:06:42 補充:

    2. that going (X) >>> by going (O)

    4. travel the world (X >> travel around the world (O)

    >>> 表示正確

    令外原文中許多 "I" 打成 "i"

    參考資料: me
  • 1 0 年前

    1. differant (X) --> different

    2. I believe that when you go to a new place, you will never forget what you have happened there.

    3. There're many places that are very special and fantastic , so my dream is "Traveling around the world."

    4. My special experience was the first time I went to France.

    5. The most special place is (the) "Eiffel Tower", it's very magnificent.

    6. When I went up to the second floor,I looked down,"Wow" I said, you couldn't believe that how beautiful it was.

    7. At night, "Eiffel Tower" will be shine for ten minutes.

    8. If I have chance, I would like to go to France again.

    9. Traveling in different places makes me excited.

    10 .Before I went to London,I thought "Big Ben" was just a clock.

    11. But when I visited there,I knew that I was wrong because "Big Ben" was a big castle.

    12. I've seen a Big Red bridge, it's "Golden Gates Bridge."

    13. The color was beautiful and the bridge was huge.

    14. It was the first time that I saw a special color bridge.

    15. The bridge was long, it's almost 3KM and under it you can see the golden Gate Strait.

    16. You can learn more languages and how others live.

    17. That will be a very good experience to visit a new place / new places.

    18. And you can discover many special things.

    19. Take a chance to go to another places and it will be a good try.

    20. 注意:過去式、現在式、大小寫轉換、單複數

    希望對你有幫助!^^

    參考資料: 自己、奇摩字典、知識
  • 1 0 年前

    I have many happy memories in different countries.

    In different places, you can learn about different cultures.

    I believe that going to a new place, you will never forget what it has happened there.

    There're many places that are very special and fantastic, so my dream is to "travel the world".

    My special experience was the first time I visited France.

    The most special place was the Eiffel Tower and it was magnificent.

    When I went up to the second floor and looked down "Wow" I said, I could not believe how beautiful it was.

    At the night, the Eiffel Tower was shining for ten minutes.

    If there's any chance, I would like to visit to France again.

    Traveling in different places made me excited.

    The most beautiful architecture I'd seen is the Big Ben.

    Before I went to London, I thought Big Ben was just a clock.

    But when I visited there, I found I was wrong, the Big Ben was a big castle.

    It was over 100 years old and it's almost 100 meter height.

    I saw a Big Red bridge and it was "Golden Gate Bridge".

    The color was beautiful and the bridge was huge.

    This was the first time I saw a special colored bridge.

    This bridge was long; it was almost 3 kilometer in length and you could see the Golden Gate Strait under it.

    I think that everyone should visit other countries.

    You can learn more words and how others live.

    That will be a very good experience to go to a new place.

    And you can discover many special things.

    Take a change to try to visit other places. (or It is a good try to visit other places)

    我盡量不改原意 (但有些寫法真的太"中文"

    注意大小寫及標點

    詞態的部份 如上面那位說的 (我很難幫你決定及更改)

    2007-08-25 08:48:47 補充:

    還有 注意冠詞/數量 (the, a ) + 後面是否加 (s) or (es)

    參考資料: 曾認真學過英文的人, 曾認真學過英文的人
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