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皺兒 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 1 0 年前

英語演講的中文草稿可以幫我看一下有沒離題和翻譯

幫我看一下這篇中文草稿有沒有離題

因為我覺得好像有點離題

請幫我想想看怎麼寫比較通順

又沒有離題

還有幫我翻譯一下

題目是:How to make friends with others

事實上,結交朋友並不難。但是朋友有分很多種,有可以跟你談心的朋友,討論功課的朋友,甚至有讓你誤入歧途的朋友。朋友應該仔細挑選,從他的言行舉止或者生活習慣中來了解他的性格。

從我的經驗說起。在國小,我總是認為別人會自己來找我交朋友,不會主動去與別人互動,但最後的結果卻沒交到什麼朋友。升上國中,我開始主動交朋友,但卻因為沒有仔細選擇朋友,而差點誤入歧途。那次的過錯讓我非常後悔,後來

有一個老師跟我說:「真誠的朋友,一定希望妳快樂。他會分擔你的憂愁和苦悶,覺不會讓你心裡難過。」這句話深深的點醒我,讓我了解朋友的定義。的確,選擇自己適合的朋友,是非常重要的。主動與自己選擇的朋友談話,不僅可以更了解他,你們的友情也可能會越來越堅定,任誰都沒辦法破壞。

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與他人做朋友,是一件很有趣的事,有人說交朋友很難,但也有人說結交朋友非常有趣。事實上,我認為結交朋友並不難。但是朋友有分很多種,有可以跟你談心的朋友,也有可以討論功課的朋友,甚至有可能會讓你誤入歧途的朋友。所以朋友應該仔細挑選,從他的言行舉止或者生活習慣中來了解他的性格。

從我的經驗說起。在國小,我總是認為別人會自己來找我交朋友,不會主動去與別人互動,但最後的結果卻沒交到什麼朋友。升上國中,我開始主動交朋友,但卻因為沒有仔細選擇朋友,而差點誤入歧途。那次的過錯讓我非常後悔,後來

有一個老師跟我說:「真誠的朋友,一定希望妳快樂。他會分擔你的憂愁和苦悶,絕對不會讓你心裡難過。」

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這句話深深的點醒我,讓我了解朋友的定義。的確,選擇自己適合的朋友,是非常重要的。

在選擇朋友這個步驟之後,我們就可以開始結交朋友。你可以先觀察他的喜好,例如他喜歡吃的東西,或是他喜歡的電視節目等。然後從他的喜好中開始和他對話。或者是主動靠近和他聊天。很多的友情都是從慢慢聊天之中而培養的。當你們有了共同的話題之後,你們的感情會變得更好。然後你們可以一起吃中餐,或者是一起運動,參加戶外活動。相信我,這可以培養你們之間的友情。然後,你就可以順利的交到一位朋友。但是友情還是需要許多的耐心去維持的,當然,如何維持,這就得看你們之間的默契了!

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然後你們的友情就會越來越堅定,誰也沒辦法破壞了!結交朋友的好處實在很多,只要照著我所說的這樣做,再去用心經營,相信你一定可以結交更多的朋友!Just do it!

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部是上面那篇

下面那篇是新改的

ps事演講3~5分鐘

這樣會不會太多或太少

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    1 0 年前
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    Being friends with others is an interesting thing. Some may say it's hard

    to make friends, but some may say it's interesting. Actually, it's not hard

    to make friends for me. There are many different types of friends when

    making friends. For example: friends with whom you can have a heart-

    to-heart talk, friends with whom you can discuss your work, even friends

    who might lead you to wrong roads. So, you have to choose your

    friends carefully. You can consider his personalities by his words,

    behaviors or life habbits. When it mention to my experience,

    when I studied in the elementary school, I thought others would

    come to me and ask me to be their friend. I never interacted with

    others actively. For sure, I didn't have any friends that time. Later,

    when I was a junior high school student, I started to make friends

    actively. Still, because I didn't carefully choose my friends, I almost

    went on the wrong road. The mistake made me regetful, then, a teacher

    said to me: A sincere friend wishes you happiness for certain. He

    would share your sadness, and he never makes you feel bad. The words

    touched me deeply to make me understand what is a true firend. It is

    very important to choose a suitable friend. After the "chosing friends"

    step, we can start make friends. You can observe his likeness, such

    as: his favotie food or his favorive Tv program. Then, talk to him about

    what he likes. Chat with him actively. Many friendship fosters by

    talking. When you have the same talking-point, your friendship will

    become better. Then you can do things together. Eat lunch together,

    exercise together and do outdoor exercises together. Trust me,

    this can nurture your friendship. Finally, you make a friend successfully.

    But you need enough patience to maintain the friendship. How to keep?

    It depens on your tacit understanding. Just do it !!!

    3~5太長拉!!!!!!!!!!!!!>"<~~~

    2007-09-13 03:32:13 補充:

    太長拉!~有點離題囉

    把主要的重點拉出來說就有三分鐘囉!!

    參考資料: 3~5太長拉!!!!!!!!!!!!!>”<~~~
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