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請英文高手幫我校正文法

There are six people in my family. Both of my parents are retired. The rest of my family members are sisters and one brother.

I graduated from National Open University. My major is in business. I have been to NZ to study English for one year and passed the exam of Frist Certificate in 1993.

The best opportunity of life is able to learn things from job ,therefore If there is a chance that could work at your company in the future , I would certainly do my best as I could.

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我是要說:

人生中最好的機會是能工作和學習能結合。

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  • Zippi
    Lv 7
    1 0 年前
    最佳解答

    There are six people in my family. Both of (omitted) my parents are retired. The rest of my family members are (my) sisters and one brother.

    I graduated from National Open University. My major is in (omitted) business (Business). I have been to NZ to study English for one year and passed the exam of Frist (First) Certificate in 1993.

    The best opportunity of life is able to learn things from job (There is nothing better than learning things from jobs in life); therefore, If (if) there is a chance(an opportunity) that could(to) work at (for) your company in the future (omitted) , I would certainly do my best as I could (omitted).

    Omitted: 可省略

    參考資料: me
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  • Kai
    Lv 5
    1 0 年前

    基本上您英文不錯!!!~~~

    最好講一下幾個姊姊,然後,

    My major is in business................

    第一,有"in"錯了,直接加"bussiness"就可以了!~~

    要不然就---

    "I am majored in bussiness."

    I have been to NZ to study ...................

    第二,過去了不是現在完成要用過去完成式"had"才對!~

    而且後面"passed"過去式了!~

    然後"to study"改"for studying"會比較好!~

    我會這樣講--

    "I had been to NZ for studying English one year there and passed the exa

    m of Frist Certificate in 1993."

    第三,第三段 therefore要大寫後面"鬥點 , "前面"句點 . ",

    "If"要小寫......

    其他大致(90%以上)都okay la!!~~~

    2007-09-11 22:21:34 補充:

    bussiness要大寫!~

    2007-09-11 22:22:37 補充:

    更正

    business

    2007-09-11 22:27:48 補充:

    人生中最好的機會是能工作和學習能結合。

    The best opportunity in lifetimes is "being" able to learn things from

    working.

    參考資料: 留加五六年加大學英文系, 小腦
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  • IRCA
    Lv 7
    1 0 年前

    沒有 問題耶 ~

    The best opportunity in life is able to learn things from job

    只有 這句的 表達 意思 似乎 有點 怪怪 ~

    你再考量一下 你想 表達 怎麼樣的 意思 ?

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  • 1 0 年前

    文法大致ok

    但寫法可以修改一下, 加一些形容詞更好.

    for example:

    I have two younder sisters and an elder brother. My parents are retired from teaching ......

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