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There are six people in my family. Both of my parents are retired. The rest of my family members are sisters and one brother. I graduated from National Open University. My major is in business. I have been to NZ to study English for one year and passed the exam of Frist Certificate in 1993. The best... 顯示更多 There are six people in my family. Both of my parents are retired. The rest of my family members are sisters and one brother.

I graduated from National Open University. My major is in business. I have been to NZ to study English for one year and passed the exam of Frist Certificate in 1993.


The best opportunity of life is able to learn things from job ,therefore If there is a chance that could work at your company in the future , I would certainly do my best as I could.
更新: 我是要說:
人生中最好的機會是能工作和學習能結合。
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