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匿名使用者 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 1 0 年前

文法.時態是否正確?

1. I will be here until I ...(我會在這裡直到我...)

I will be here until I fimish my homework.

2. ...as long as I live.(只要我活著,就會...)

I will sleep as long as I live.

3. I heard ... while I ... (當我在...的時候,我聽說)

I heard someone say I am bad while I in the restroom.

4. Shortly before I ... (在我...不久前,...)

Shortly before I went shopping,I had make up.

請告訴我哪裡寫錯,並寫出原因,謝謝

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  • 行竹
    Lv 5
    1 0 年前
    最佳解答

    請告訴我哪裡寫錯,並寫出原因,謝謝

    1. I will be here until I ...(我會在這裡直到我...)

    I will be here until I fimish my homework.

    a. 除了finish打錯外,其他OK.

    2. ...as long as I live.(只要我活著,就會...)

    I will sleep as long as I live.

    a. 文法上不能說您有錯,但語意上卻有點怪.好像活著只爲了睡覺一樣.可以說It’s a good sentence, but not an excellent sentence.

    b. 不如改成I will work hard/help others as long as I live. 只要我活著,我就會努力工作/幫助別人...

    3. I heard ... while I ... (當我在...的時候,我聽說)

    I heard someone say I am bad while I in the restroom.

    a. 既然用的是過去式動詞heard,那麼後面say接的名詞子句(當受詞用),時態也要一致.

    b. 建議改成I heard someone say I was bad while I was in the restroom.

    4. Shortly before I ... (在我...不久前,...)

    Shortly before I went shopping, I had make up.

    a. 您的句子出現了兩個動詞,一般而言, 先發生的動作用完成式,後發生的動作用簡單式.

    b. 而您例舉的句子又是發生在過去,故要改成過去完成式和過去簡單式.

    c. 建議改成Shortly before I went shopping, I had made(myself) up.

    d. 逛街went shopping的動作發生在畫好妝had made up之後.

  • 1 0 年前

    恭喜你

    文法部份

    你都對喔!

    fimish->應該是finish吧

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