angela 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 1 0 年前

煩請英文達人幫我改一下英文短篇日記..感激..

We went to Kyoto to see the Gion festival on last

Sunday

Have you ever seen it ?

It was the day right after typhoon went out (??) 

Then it was not so crowded in the town

There were many girls wearing yukata ,and many foreigner

We wandered around the town

There are many old silk fabric company in muromati

They decorated old folding screen ,old armor , old kimono (edo

period) in the hall

Excellent !!! there were not old but beautiful

I didn’t know that there were tow kind of portable shrine

until at the time

One is hook the other is yama

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  • 1 0 年前
    最佳解答

    We went to Kyoto to see the Gion festival last

    Sunday.

    Have you ever seen it ?

    It was the day right after typhoon left. 

    The town was not so crowded.

    There were many girls wearing yukatas, and many foreigners.

    We wandered around the town.

    There are many old silk fabric companies in Muromachi.

    They displayed an old folding screen, old armor, and old kimonos (from the Edo period) in the hall.

    They were all excellent !!! They were not old but beautiful.

    I didn't know that there were portable towable-type shrines

    until then.

    One is called Hook, and the other is called Yama.

    參考資料: 在美國長大的自己
  • 1 0 年前

    因為是受朋友所託不確定意思及正確性,

    不過非常感謝^O^... 謝謝啦...

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