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匿名使用者 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 1 0 年前

求職英文自傳..煩請大大們幫忙修正..謝謝

寫得蠻匆忙的

文法或內容結構請各位高手不吝給意見

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▊Career Experiences

Position: Registrar of Academic Affairs Office

Unit : Chang Jung University

After graduating from university, I worked at Chang Jung University. Being a registrar of academic affairs office, I managed students’ personal information, grades records, credits certification, official documents, etc. From the working items, I got pretty organized.

There were many departments in the university as CMO, therefore, I learned about the functions of each department and was good at communicating or negotiating with different co-workers.

Besides, managing all students working part time in our office, I had an excellent opportunity to improve my leadership and arrangement ability, which is useful to my next job.

One significant task of my job was to handle entrance examination of our college. To make all details well done, I must be sensitive to all kinds of situations and each procedure. Surely being good at communicating with my colleagues was necessary. So, I could deal with affairs individually and did my best to finish all tasks well in time.

Position: Junior High School English Teacher

Unit : MSJH(民生國中) & PSJH(北興國中) in Chia Yi City

To seek for different working experiences and to enrich my ability, I quitted from Chang Jung to be an English teach in junior high. Career changing is really not easy, but I do learn a lot from my new job.

Teaching improves my language ability;managing all class benefits my leadership as well. Of course, connecting with students’ parents strengthen my communicating skill again.

By the way, what do I think the most important value we should deliver to children is moral education. Because good character is the most significant in nowaday’s society.

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  • 1 0 年前
    最佳解答

    I am not good at resume or autobigraphy (also spelling), but usually we will not use too casual words like " I got pretty organized" or "I quitted" in the sentences.

    I learned skill how to manange things well organized

    I resigned

    Commication skill and leadership are mentioned, which may need to say more specific.

    The last paragraph seems to be your idea and not career experience. May be you should think what it's you purpose of writing this autobiography then decide how to express it properly

  • 1 0 年前

    你可以去下面那個部落格看看,他上面有發表很多自傳翻譯的文章和相關資料,還有許多英文學習相關,對你的翻譯應該滿有幫助!還有一些面談面試的要領,你都可以參考喔!你若有問題也可以發問或是留言!

    部落格網址:http://tw.myblog.yahoo.com/supercanada2007/

    參考資料: 滿實用的喔
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