急幫改英文自傳

My name is Eva Zou,and I am twenty-one years old.I was born in Taichung,There are four people in my family,including my mother,sister,brother and me,when we was children,my mother gave us democratic eduction,so we can decide what thing can free do,also acquire our absolute character. I am studying in Information... 顯示更多 My name is Eva Zou,and I am twenty-one years old.I was born in Taichung,There are four people in my family,including my mother,sister,brother and me,when we was children,my mother gave us democratic eduction,so we can decide what thing can free do,also acquire our absolute character. I am studying in Information technology departmentalism from National Pingtung Institute of Commerce university.for me is hard that is learning programming languages,I leanring very bad,but also lenrning a lot of computer knowledge and computer software application.In my free time,I like to listen music,watch tv,and read novels.It is relex my heart that listen music and wath tv.In Future,I hope can learn English very well,so I nessery hard to practice English every day,and after graduate can find a good job.
幫忙吧,改成順成一點的句子,或多加幾句適合的句子。謝謝。
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