小K 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 1 0 年前

英文高手請進~這是一篇讓我務煞煞的文章

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For punishment to be effective, it must produce a great behavioral change, result in behavior that is permanent, and produce minimal side effects. However, none of these changes is a result of corporal punishment. Therefore, we should consider alternatives to corporal punishment. Because discipline is necessary to educate children. One of the alternatives are to emphasize students’ positive behaviors. Some research shows that giving extra homeworks may be a good choice.

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這到底要怎麼更正比較好呢

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不好意思啦~這是一篇要修改文法

想說哪裡還有錯啦

麻煩大家幫我找找看

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  • 1 0 年前
    最佳解答

    bahavior = behaviour (兩個字都可以用)

    此外,我也把問題看得務煞煞了。~~~

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    For punishment to be effective, it must produce a great behavioral change, result in behavior that is permanent, and produce minimal side effects. However, none of these changes is a result of corporal punishment. Therefore, we should consider alternatives to corporal punishment. Because discipline is necessary to educate children. One of the alternatives are to emphasize students’ positive behaviors. Some research shows that giving extra homeworks may be a good choice.

    改正錯誤(是這篇文章的標題嗎?還是你寫完英文要別人幫忙看看是否有錯?)

    為使處罰能有效益,處罰必須能在行為上產生多些改變,能引致形成永久的行為並有最小的負面作用。然而,上述的這些改變都不是體罰能達到的。因此,我們應考慮體罰以外的其他替代方案,因為,「紀律」對教育兒童來說是必須的。

    其中一種替代方法就是強化學生的正面行為。

    有些研究顯示給予學生額外的家庭作業是個不錯的選擇。

    先翻一下,如果是要改正英文的內容,晚點再試看看。

    2007-10-09 16:22:56 補充:

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    For punishment to be effective, it must produce a greater behavioral change, resulting in behavior that is permanent, and produce minimal side effects. However, none of these changes are a result of corporal punishment.

    2007-10-09 16:26:51 補充:

    Therefore, we should consider alternatives to corporal punishment. Because discipline is necessary to educate children. One of the alternatives are to emphasize students’ positive behaviors. Some research shows that giving extra homework may be a good choice.

    2007-10-09 16:36:17 補充:

    打錯了

    none of these changes "are results" of .....才對

    One of the alternatives "IS" to emphasize students' positive behaviors

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    6 年前

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  • 1 0 年前

    沒說明要大家做什麼事情,大概不是改英文文法吧?

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