這是我的英文自傳-是要應徵用的麻煩幫我修改和翻譯一下

英文自傳是我自己寫的,可是有些不會翻譯麻煩大家幫忙一下,或者覺得哪裡文法又錯或是不通順的需要修改ㄉ麻煩告訴我!!我應徵的職位是長榮桂冠飯店的房務人員

I am Yu-ting. Hung, Jade is my English name. I am twenty years old. There are five people in my family; my father is a worker, Mother is an insurer. Both of my older brother and younger brother are university students. Parents have educated me in enlightened way since the childhood, let me grow up under the happy, warm environment, so bring up my optimistic and positive life attitude‧

I am studying in ******* University department of tourism and leisure management. 在大學二年級時曾擔任觀光系系學會的攝影組組長,而很高興也很榮幸能夠有這樣好的機會,為系上服務,再上大學後我一直都是半工半讀,曾在新天地餐廳擔任過外場服務員和烘焙坊門市小姐,這些工作都訓練我自己,讓我的處事能力提高,知道遇到事情時要如何去應變,處理事情也愈有效率,相信是要靠磨練的,感到自己好像是稚嫩的幼苗被播種成懂事的小草一般,深深感覺到自己成長了許多.

I am an optimistic‚ active girl. My motto is ˝Never To Old Too Learn. ˝ I think learning is a happy thing. I always ask myself to learn spontaneously, so I really like to learn new things positively and cultivate my ability in everything, I have passed the elementary level of中餐.烘焙.中式點心證照. My abide by a certain level work ethics. I always push myself to do the best I can when I work. Furthermore, I took advantage of the time I spent working to build good relationships with the people I worked with.

I have long admired your beautiful hotels, superb learning environment, and above all, excellent administer faculty. I am looking forward to entering your hotel and learning as much as I can. Wish I could matriculate your department. That’s all for my self-introduction. Thanks for your attention!

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  • 1 0 年前
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    My name is Yu-ting Hung, also known as Jade. I am twenty years old. There are five people in my family; my father is a worker, Mother is an insurer. Both of my older brother and younger brother are university students. Parents have educated me in enlightened way since the childhood; let me grow up under the happy, warm environment, so bring up my optimistic and positive life attitude.

    I am studying in ******* University department of tourism and leisure management. I had joined the photograph group in my sophomore year and I was the group leader, which was such an honor to serve my class. During my school life I had always been half working and half studying. I had work in New Palace as a waitress and an accountant in a bakery store. All these jobs had train me a lot, and race my ability to deal with a contingency or emergency. I feel like I am growing up by all these training.

    I am an optimistic‚ active girl. My motto is ˝Never Too Old To Learn. ˝ I think learning is a happy thing. I always ask myself to learn spontaneously, so I really like to learn new things positively and cultivate my ability in everything, I have passed the elementary level of Chinese food, bakery, and Chinese type dessert’s license. My abide by a certain level work ethics. I always push myself to do the best I can when I work. Furthermore, I took advantage of the time I spent working to build good relationships with the people I worked with. I have long admired your beautiful hotels, superb learning environment, and above all, excellent administer faculty. I am looking forward to entering your hotel and learning as much as I can. Wish I could matriculate your department. That’s all for my self-introduction. Thanks for your attention!

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  • 1 0 年前

    你可以去下面那個部落格看看,他上面有發表很多自傳翻譯的文章和相關資料,還有許多英文學習相關,對你的翻譯應該滿有幫助!還有一些面談面試的要領,你都可以參考喔!你若有問題也可以發問或是留言!

    部落格網址:http://tw.myblog.yahoo.com/supercanada2007/

    PS:之前在他的部落格上有看到應徵飯店的求職履歷自傳範例,你可以去看一看對你應該有幫助

    參考資料: 滿不錯的格
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