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可以幫我檢查 english introduce嗎??

My name is Smantha. I am nineteem.I am a cute girl and talktive.

My favorite sport is body-building. I always go to gym with

my brother, and we usually in there entire afternoon. We are

sport(s) every week. I also like reading novels. My favorite

author is Shakespeare. His wirting(s) is the best composition

I have ever read.我最喜歡他的其中一部作品:羅密歐與茱麗葉.

The story is 淒美 and romantic.希望你跟我一樣會喜歡.

1. We aresport(s) every week-------要加 s 嗎??why??

2.His wirting(s) is the best composition-------要加 s 嗎??why??

3.可以幫我翻譯其他部分嗎??以及檢查文法!!

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  • 阿蔡
    Lv 4
    1 0 年前
    最佳解答

    My name is Smantha. I am nineteen. I am a cute and talkative girl.

    My favorite activity is body-building. I always go to the gym with my brother, and we usually stay

    there the entire afternoon. We exercise every week. I also like reading novels. My favorite author is Shakespeare. His wirtings are the best I have ever read. My favorite play is Romeo and Juliet. It is sad but beautiful and romantic. I hope you like it, too.

    1. sport 是名詞, 所以不能醬用. 在英文sport比較偏可以比賽的那種, 跟中文說的運動(英文是exercise)不太一樣. 所以第三句改成activity(活動)

    2. writing是可數的, 所以要加s, 因為莎士比亞有不只一部作品, 而且要用複數動詞 are

    3. a)改了兩個拼法錯誤(nineteen, talkative)

    b)and 通常接兩個名詞, 兩個形容詞, 或兩個動詞. 第二句可以用這兩種寫法

    I am cute and talkative (兩個形容詞)

    I am a cute and talkative girl (兩個名詞, 但第一個省略因為是同一人)

    c)composition比較偏文章的意思, 倒數第四句把字刪掉可以翻成"他的作品是我讀過最棒的"

    d)倒數第三句的作品翻成play(戲劇)因為莎士比亞有很多這方面的寫作. 不用這個字沒關係

    e)Romeo and Juliet要用斜體因為是戲劇名

    f)淒美我不確定怎麼翻, 所以拆開來寫sad but beautiful(用but因為一個是正面的感覺, 一個是負面的)

    參考資料: 國語有點破的美國大學生:僅供參考
  • 1 0 年前

    我直接幫你改~

    My name is Smantha. I am nineteen. I am a talktive cute girl.

    My favorite sport is body-building.

    I always go to gym with my brother, and we usually

    stay there for the entire afternoon.

    We work out every week. I also enjoy reading novels.

    My favorite author is Shakespear.

    His wirtings are the best that I have ever read.

    Romeo and Juliet is my favorit.

    The story is sad and romantic. I hope you like it as I do.

    1. 第一題的文法本身就錯誤

    2. writing 可以加 s 因為他不只寫一本小說

    參考資料: 自己
  • 1 0 年前

    My name is Smantha. I am nineteen years old.

    I am a cute girl and talktive. My favorite sport is body-building.

    I always go to gym with my brother, and we usually spend a whole afternoon there. We work out every week.

    I also like reading novels. My favorite author is Shakespeare. His writting is the best that I have ever read.One of my favorite works of Shakespeare is Romeo and Juliet.The story is heartrending but beautiful and also romantic. I hope you will like it as I do.

    2007-10-04 14:04:31 補充:

    你可以用work out來表示運動

    因為是we是複數所以不用加 s

    不好意思

    Writing要加 s 喔...

    改成 His writings are the best that I have ever read.

    因為是一個人的所有著作

    參考資料: me, longman字典
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