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泰銘 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 1 0 年前

英文達人請幫我英文自介校正

以下是一段英文自介,請幚我檢查文法或修改

Hi everybody my name is XXX.

大家好,我叫XXX

I'm thirty-four years old.

今年24歲

studying in XX University department of XX Three grades now.

目前就讀於XX大學XX系三年級

In the family has four members.

家中有4位成員

There are parents, and younger sister

家裡有父母親和妹妹

I have a very good relationship with my parents.

我和家人感情很好

My house lives in the XX Commercial District neighborhood, so go shopping very convenient.

我家住在XX商圈附近,所以逛街很方便。

The individuality belongs to the stuffy show, also is a little introverted ,

個性屬於慢熱型,也有點內向

Follows not the ripe person always a little to be away from the feeling ,

跟不熟的人總是有距離感

But once knows well, does not have this aspect the question

但一旦熟識,就沒有這方面的問題

My hobby is listening music and playing computer,

我的興趣是聽音樂和玩電腦,

Still have already gone to the movie, hope can learn some English more in the future.

還有看電影,希望未來能夠多學習一些英文。

Very glad to follow everybody of the same class

很高興跟大家同班

Hope to form and send to the new friend in this class

希望在這個班上可以結交到新的朋友

The above is my introducing myself, thank everybody for listening to my introducing myself.

以上是我的自我介紹,謝謝大家聽我的自我介紹。

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  • 匿名使用者
    1 0 年前
    最佳解答

    Hi everybody, my name is XXX.

    大家好,我叫XXX

    I'm thirty-four years old.

    今年24歲

    I am currently studying in the third grade of XX University.

    目前就讀於XX大學XX系三年級

    I have four family members.

    家中有4位成員

    My family includes my parents and my sister.

    家裡有父母親和妹妹

    I have a close relationship with my parents.

    我和家人感情很好

    I live near the XX Commercial District neighborhood, so I could shop conveniently.

    我家住在XX商圈附近,所以逛街很方便。

    I am shy, and I belong into the "慢熱型".

    個性屬於慢熱型,也有點內向

    There is always a distance feeling between someone I do not know very well.

    跟不熟的人總是有距離感

    But once I am fimiliar with this person, I will not have this problem anymore.

    但一旦熟識,就沒有這方面的問題

    My hobby is listening to music and play computer.

    我的興趣是聽音樂和玩電腦,

    and watch movies. My goal is to learn more English in the future.

    還有看電影,希望未來能夠多學習一些英文。

    I'm glad to be in this class.

    很高興跟大家同班

    I hope I could make some new friends in this class.

    希望在這個班上可以結交到新的朋友

    The above is the introduction of myself, thank you everybody for listening.

    以上是我的自我介紹,謝謝大家聽我的自我介紹

    參考資料: 自己 我在加拿大學習了4年 希望我有幫助到你 對了 你是不是用翻譯機 == 因為很像耶 因為我國語不好所以滿熱型我不是很懂 你加油囉~
  • 1 0 年前

    Hi everybody my name is XXX.

    大家好,我叫XXX

    如果你有英文名字 你可以也打上去!

    比如說 My name is XXX(中文) known as XXX(英文).

    Known as 就是 又被知道為 這樣一句話就可以讓人知道你的中英文名字 也有人是寫綽號啦 看是什麼樣的一個自我介紹

    I'm thirty four (twenty four) years old.

    今年24歲

    是24還34歲阿? twenty four是24 thirty four是34

    I am now studying in XX University department of XX, a three grades student.

    目前就讀於XX大學XX系三年級

    (I am now a junior student in XX University, major in XX) 我推薦你用這一句 感覺比較專業 Junior就是大三的意思 Major是主修 如果你有副修也可以提 副修是minor

    There are four people in my family, my parents and a younger sister.

    家中有4位成員,家裡有父母親和妹妹

    I have a very good relationship with my parents.

    我和家人感情很好

    My house lives in the XX Commercial District neighborhood, so shopping is very convenient to me.

    我家住在XX商圈附近,所以逛街很方便。

    The individuality belongs to the stuffy show, also is a little introverted ,

    個性屬於慢熱型,也有點內向

    Follows not the ripe person always a little to be away from the feeling

    (I always have a feeling that want to have a distant to people I don’t really know.)

    跟不熟的人總是有距離感

    But when I get to know them more, and closer to them I don’t have this kind of problem.

    但一旦熟識,就沒有這方面的問題

    My hobby is listening music and playing computer, and watching the movies; I hoe I can learn more about English in my future.

    我的興趣是聽音樂和玩電腦,還有看電影,希望未來能夠多學習一些英文。

    I am very glad to be in the same class with everybody.

    很高興跟大家同班

    Hope I can meet new friends in here.

    希望在這個班上可以結交到新的朋友

    This is my self introduction, thank you for listening.

    以上是我的自我介紹,謝謝大家聽我的自我介紹。

    參考資料: ME
  • 1 0 年前

    Hi everybody my name is XXX.

    大家好,我叫XXX

    I'm thirty-four years old.

    今年24歲

    studying in XX University department of XX Three grades now.

    應該是studying in the XX department at XX University.

    三年級是the third grade或是就用junior這裡是三年級生不是國中生

    In the family has four members.

    There are four members in my family 這樣比較通

    There are parents, and younger sister

    接前面 -my parents and a younger sister 這樣才對

    I have a very good relationship with my parents.

    我和家人感情很好

    家人是family所以就 with my family

    My house lives in the XX Commercial District neighborhood, so go shopping very convenient.

    我家住在XX商圈附近,所以逛街很方便。

    不是你家住在是你住在...附近用vicinity.....後面用連接詞 so連接的是兩個句子.所以後半句ㄧ定要有主詞......

    整句: I live in the vicinity of XX Commercial District, so it is very

    convenient for me to go shopping.這樣比較通

    The individuality belongs to the stuffy show, also is a little introverted ,

    個性屬於慢熱型,也有點內向

    Follows not the ripe person always a little to be away from the feeling ,

    跟不熟的人總是有距離感

    I always feel there is a gap between a unfamiliar person and me.

    這樣比較好

    But once knows well, does not have this aspect the question

    但一旦熟識,就沒有這方面的問題

    句子在文法中不能沒主詞

    But once I know them well, I won't have this aspect of question.

    My hobby is listening music and playing computer,

    我的興趣是聽音樂和玩電腦,

    listen是不及物動詞要加介係詞to...你是玩電腦遊戲不是玩電腦吧

    My hobby is listening to music and playing computer games.

    Still have already gone to the movie, hope can learn some English more

    in the future.

    還有看電影,希望未來能夠多學習一些英文。

    I also like to watch movies, hoping that I can learn more English in the

    future.這樣比較順

    Very glad to follow everybody of the same class

    很高興跟大家同班

    I am so glad to be in the same class with you all. 這樣好點

    Hope to form and send to the new friend in this class

    希望在這個班上可以結交到新的朋友

    I hope I can make friends with new faces in the class.我會這樣說

    The above is my introducing myself, thank everybody for listening to my introducing myself.

    以上是我的自我介紹,謝謝大家聽我的自我介紹。

    self-introduce 就好了吧

  • Zippi
    Lv 7
    1 0 年前

    Hi everybody my name is XXX.

    >> Hi! Everybody, xxx

    大家好,我叫XXX

    I'm thirty-four years old.

    今年24歲

    如果是24 >> twenty-four

    studying in XX University department of XX Three grades now.

    I am in my junior year at xx Department of xx University.

    目前就讀於XX大學XX系三年級

    In the family has four members.

    >> There are four members in my family.

    家中有4位成員

    There are parents, and younger sister

    >> They are my parents, younger sister and me

    家裡有父母親和妹妹

    I have a very good relationship with my parents.

    我和家人感情很好

    My house lives in the XX Commercial District neighborhood, so go shopping very convenient.

    >> My home is near xx business district, so it is convenient to go shopping.

    我家住在XX商圈附近,所以逛街很方便。

    The individuality belongs to the stuffy show, also is a little introverted ,

    >> I have a slow personality and am a bit introvert.

    個性屬於慢熱型,也有點內向

    Follows not the ripe person always a little to be away from the feeling ,

    >> I always have a feeling to keep strangers at a distance.

    跟不熟的人總是有距離感

    But once knows well, does not have this aspect the question

    But this problem will go once I know them well.

    但一旦熟識,就沒有這方面的問題

    My hobby is listening music and playing computer,

    >> My hobby is listening to music and playing the computer

    我的興趣是聽音樂和玩電腦,

    Still have already gone to the movie, hope can learn some English more in the future.

    >> And watching movies. I hope to learn more English in future.

    還有看電影,希望未來能夠多學習一些英文。

    Very glad to follow everybody of the same class

    >> I am glad of being in the same class with you all.

    很高興跟大家同班

    Hope to form and send to the new friend in this class

    I hope we can meet new friends here.

    希望在這個班上可以結交到新的朋友

    The above is my introducing myself, thank everybody for listening to my introducing myself.

    >> Thank you for your listening to my self-introduction.

    以上是我的自我介紹,謝謝大家聽我的自我介紹。

    參考資料: me
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