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以下是一段英文自介,請幚我檢查文法或修改 Hi everybody my name is XXX. 大家好,我叫XXX I'm thirty-four years old. 今年24歲 studying in XX University department of XX Three grades now. 目前就讀於XX大學XX系三年級 In the family has four members. 家中有4位成員 There are parents, and younger sister 家裡有父母親和妹妹 I have a very good relationship with my... 顯示更多 以下是一段英文自介,請幚我檢查文法或修改
Hi everybody my name is XXX.
大家好,我叫XXX
I'm thirty-four years old.
今年24歲
studying in XX University department of XX Three grades now.
目前就讀於XX大學XX系三年級
In the family has four members.
家中有4位成員
There are parents, and younger sister
家裡有父母親和妹妹
I have a very good relationship with my parents.
我和家人感情很好
My house lives in the XX Commercial District neighborhood, so go shopping very convenient.
我家住在XX商圈附近,所以逛街很方便。
The individuality belongs to the stuffy show, also is a little introverted ,
個性屬於慢熱型,也有點內向
Follows not the ripe person always a little to be away from the feeling ,
跟不熟的人總是有距離感
But once knows well, does not have this aspect the question
但一旦熟識,就沒有這方面的問題
My hobby is listening music and playing computer,
我的興趣是聽音樂和玩電腦,
Still have already gone to the movie, hope can learn some English more in the future.
還有看電影,希望未來能夠多學習一些英文。
Very glad to follow everybody of the same class
很高興跟大家同班
Hope to form and send to the new friend in this class
希望在這個班上可以結交到新的朋友
The above is my introducing myself, thank everybody for listening to my introducing myself.
以上是我的自我介紹,謝謝大家聽我的自我介紹。
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