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siaochan 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 1 0 年前

英文自我介紹文法修正

Hello everyone, I'm glad to introduce myself to all of you.

My name is ___. I'm second child of my family.

I have an elder brother and a younger sister.

I major in journalism. I hope that one day I can become a journalism.

I think I'm a friendly and easygoing person but a little befuddled.

I like chating with my friends and making friends because I can get many pleasure and experiences from different people.

When I frustrated, and it's so nice have a shoulder to cry on.

In my leisure time, I like watching Japan drama,listening to music,and

surfing the Internet.

My favorite sports is baseball.

Although I can't play it but I like watching baseball game very much.

Especially Wang, now he is very popular not only in Taiwan but also in America.

請問上面的句子文法有沒有錯誤

有的話要怎麼改?

還有最後一段要怎麼結尾

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  • 1 0 年前
    最佳解答

    Hello everyone, I'm glad to introduce myself to all of you.

    My name is ___. I have an elder brother and a younger sister and I am the second child in my family.

    I major in journalism. I hope that one day I can become a journalist.

    I have character that is friendly and easygoing but a little befuddled.

    I like chatting with my friends and making friends because I can get many pleasure and experiences from different people.

    When I encounter setback, it will be nice have a shoulder to cry on.

    In my leisure time, I like watching Japan drama, listening to music and

    surfing the Internet.

    My favourite sport is baseball. I can't play baseball but I like watching this game very much, especially watching Wang in the game. Now he is very popular not only in Taiwan but also in America .

    I will end my self-introduction here and thanks for your patience listening to me.

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  • 1 0 年前

    第二號回答很有問題:

    第一部分沒有根據

    第二部分(如下)根本亂答

    I have an elder brother and a younger sister.

    I have an older brother and a younger sister.

    elder 不好

    elder 是用來形容長輩 例如你 爸 爺爺

    除非你哥有比你十多歲老

    ?????????????????

    不懂真的不要亂發表 沒錯的都讓你說錯了

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  • 1 0 年前

    Hello everyone, I'm glad to introduce myself to all of you.

    這樣說不好 應該把I'm glad to introduce myself to all of you放在結尾還有glad不好要用happy比較好 "我很高興我能向你們介紹我自己"

    My name is ___. I'm second child of my family.

    My name is ___. I'm the second child of my family.

    I have an elder brother and a younger sister.

    I have an older brother and a younger sister.

    elder 不好

    elder 是用來形容長輩 例如你 爸 爺爺

    除非你哥有比你十多歲老

    I major in journalism. I hope that one day I can become a journalism.

    My major is journalism. I hope that one day I can become a journalist.

    I think I'm a friendly and easygoing person but a little befuddled.

    but a little befuddled?? 容易被迷惑?不明白事物?

    I like chating with my friends and making friends because I can get many pleasure and experiences from different people.

    I like to chat with my friends and to make new friends because I enjoy learning different peoples personality.

    When I frustrated, and it's so nice have a shoulder to cry on.

    When I am frustrated, it's so nice to have a friends shoulder to cry on.

    In my leisure time, I like watching Japan drama,listening to music,and

    surfing the Internet.

    During my leisure time, I like to watch Japanese drama, listen to music,

    and browse the Internet.

    My favorite sports is baseball.

    My favorite sport is baseball.

    Although I can't play it but I like watching baseball game very much.

    你文法沒錯 但改這樣比較好

    Although I can't play it but watching a baseball game entertained me.

    Especially Wang, now he is very popular not only in Taiwan but also in America.

    I adore Wang the most. He is a very popular baseball player not only in taiwan but also in america.

    I'm very happy to introduce myself to all of you. Thank you for listening and have a wonderful day!

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