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Question

Education

Candidate for degree in foreign language from Haufan University

Technical

Has passed the examination conducted by CCEA in following subjects

( Electron-Commerce )

( Calculator-Survey )

( Entering Chinese type : 72 in a minute )

Award of the second of composition contest

People

Appointed principal of Diabolo Club

Elected to a general administration of Cheer Squad

Participated in dramatics and intramural athletics

Work Experience

Receptionist and waitress in a western style restaurant about two years

Worked about one year as a model and a performer

References available upon request

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Answer 1

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Educates

The candidate for the degree in the foreign language from the Haufan University

Technical

The Chinese type which the technology (electronic commerce) passed in the below subject which has been conducted test CCEA (calculator survey) (enters: 72 immediately) second prize constitution competition

People

Airborne top club's appointment's principal elects to cheers the squad the general management to participate in the extra-curricular performance in the play and the city athletics

The work experience

Reception clerk and the waitress works about one year pattern in the western style restaurant about two years and the performer

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Answer 2

教育

候選人為學位以來自 Haufan 大學的外國語

技術上的

已經通過在下列的主題中被 CCEA 引導的考試

（電子－商業）

（計算者－調查）

（進入中國類型： 72 在分鐘內）

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