MY name is 名字. I graduate form 學校 and major in Industrial Engineering and Management.
I spent much time to keep my professional knowledge improvement ,therefore, in my free time, I like to read some books relative to manufacturing . I believe I can get some management experience and skill through it.Besides,I try hard to read up english. We now live in a global village , competition from all over the world,international common language mativate me to delve into.
I wish I can get an position correlate with industrial management,so I can offer what I was learning,thanks for open the doors to me.
最接近實務的課程我打： it was the most close course to factory practical .....我自己都覺得怪怪的，這樣通嗎？？
最接近工廠實務的課程我打：I think it was the
most close course to factory practical
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MY name is 名字. I graduated form 學校 and majored in Industrial Engineering and Management.
I spent a lot of time to keep my professional knowledge improving, therefore, in my free time, I like to read some books related to manufactory . I believe I can get the management experiences and skills from the books. Besides (that), I try hard to improve my English because we live in the Global Village now. We have to compete with all people around the world.
I hope I can get a position correlate with my perfessional skills, and I can use everything I learn from school into the job, thanks for opening the doors to me.
1. keep後面動詞一律使用進行式：ex, keep thinking....
2. 和...有相關.....用related to sth...
3. 除此之外：besides that....
4. Global Village是專有名詞，要用大寫
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