可以幫我檢查這篇英文演講稿的文法跟翻譯嗎？

Question

請幫我檢查文法跟單字，因為我是照中文翻出來的

很多單字、片語、文法都不是很確定，謝謝。

中文：

這些東西是我想介紹給同學的

它們是我從國小開始參加同人販售會的活動場刊

當然到那邊也買了很多小周邊跟同人本不過因為太多且攜帶不便所以沒有一並帶來

第一次參加活動是在小六畢業

我自己一個人去，那時我很緊張因為去的人大多數都比我還要年長

不過那並不是很重要

因為我真的很喜歡漫畫，所以很高興看到有那麼多興趣相投的人

在那之後我幾乎年年都會參加活動，那就像是一個專門為喜歡動漫的人所舉辦的盛會

我很慶幸我對漫畫的喜愛所以才能很快樂的參加這種活動

因為去了之後它總能讓我充滿力量去面對現實的生活的辛勞

英文：

These are the things which I want to introduce to my classmates.

These bookds were be bought since I joined the fancyfrontier and COMIC WORLD TAIWAN.

Of course I also bought many things like notes、fans、paper bags......and books

but it is too many to bring so I didn't bring them this time.

The first time I go there when I graduated the elementary school

I went there by myself and I was very nervous when I saw people who went there were all older then I.

But it didn't matter .

Because I really love comics so I were happy saw so many people had the same interest.

From then on I almost join the actions every year.

just like a party for anyone who like comic and animation.

I am glad that I love comics so I can join the actions happily.

Because of it I can get more power to faced with my swot in the actuality.

Answer 1

最佳解答

These are the things which I want to introduce to my classmates.

These stuff were bought since I joined the fancyfrontier and COMIC WORLD TAIWAN many years ago.

You bet I also bought many things like notes, fans, paper bags......and books. But I cannot carry all of them here, so here are just a part of my collections.

The first time I went there was when I graduated from the elementary school. I went there all by myself and I was very nervous when I saw people who went there were all older than me.

But it didn't matter because I really loved comics. And I was happy to see so many people had the same interest in comics, just like me.

From then on I almost took part in the activities every year.

It's just like a party for everyone who likes comics and animations.

I am glad that I love comics so much that I can join the annaul party happily.

Everytime I go there, I can get more energy and I feel that I can face the hardships in my life and solve them easily.