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Dear Suzie

親愛的Suzie

Hi! I had a great date last night, and I want to tell you about it.

嗨﹗我昨晚有一個很棒的約會，並且我想要把它告訴你。

I went out with Fernando.

我與Fernando多出去。

You didn't meet him when you visited Colombia, but he's a twenty-one-university student.

當你拜訪Colombia時，你沒遇見他，但是他是一個21所大學的學生。

I met him at my twentieth birthday party last month (he is friend of Paula's).

我上個月在我的第20歲的生日派對遇見他(他是Paula的的朋友) .

He has long, dark hair and brown eyes, and looks terrific!

他有一頭又黑又長的頭髮和棕色的眼睛，並且看起來很棒﹗

Well, in traditional style for us Colombians, he picked me up exactly on time, at 7:00 p.m.

嗯，在我們傳統的風格哥倫比亞人裡，他正好準時接我，在下午7︰00

Of course, my parents had to ask him to come inside so he could introduce himself! 當然，我的父母必須要他變成家人，因此他能介紹自己﹗

I think they approved because they smiled at him a lot!

我認為他們贊成，因為他們經常對著他微笑﹗

After they finished questioning him (poor thing), We left in his car and …

在他們完成詢問之後他(貧窮的事情) ,我們乘他的汽車離開和

guess what … he even opened the door for me to get in!

他甚至打開門讓我進入﹗

And at the restaurant, he moved the chair for me to sit down.

並且在餐廳，他移動椅子讓我坐下。

What a gentleman!

一個怎樣的紳士﹗

I like that, although as you know, it's not so common these days.

我像那樣，雖然正如你所知，不如此普通這些天。

Answer 1

最佳解答

Dear Suzie

親愛的Suzie

Hi! I had a great date last night, and I want to tell you about it.

嗨﹗我昨晚有一個很棒的約會，並且我想要把它告訴你。

I went out with Fernando.

我與Fernando出去。

You didn't meet him when you visited Colombia, but he's a twenty-one-university student.

當你拜訪Colombia時，你沒遇見他，但是他是一個21歲的大學的學生。

I met him at my twentieth birthday party last month (he is friend of Paula's).

上個月，我在我20歲的生日派對遇見他(他是Paula的的朋友) .

He has long, dark hair and brown eyes, and looks terrific!

他有一頭又黑又長的頭髮和棕色的眼睛，並且看起來很棒﹗

Well, in traditional style for us Colombians, he picked me up exactly on time, at 7:00 p.m.

嗯，正如我們傳統的哥倫比亞人風格，他非常準時的來接我，在下午7︰00

Of course, my parents had to ask him to come inside so he could introduce himself! 當然，我的父母必須讓他進來，他才能自我介紹﹗

I think they approved because they smiled at him a lot!

我認為他們贊成，因為他們經常對著他微笑﹗

After they finished questioning him (poor thing), We left in his car and …

在他們詢問完他之後(可憐的事情) ,我們乘他的汽車離開，

guess what … he even opened the door for me to get in!

猜猜發生了什麼事?他甚至幫我開門讓我進入﹗

And at the restaurant, he moved the chair for me to sit down.

並且在餐廳，他移動椅子讓我坐下。

What a gentleman!

好一個紳士﹗

I like that, although as you know, it's not so common these days.

我喜歡那樣，雖然正如你所知，這種事情現在不常見了。

參考資料： 自己

Answer 2

Dear Suzie

親愛的Suzie

Hi! I had a great date last night, and I want to tell you about it.

嗨﹗我昨晚有一個很棒的約會，而且我想把它告訴你。

I went out with Fernando.

我與Fernando出去。

You didn't meet him when you visited Colombia, but he's a twenty-one-university student.

你來Colombia時，你沒見過他，但是他是21大學的學生。

I met him at my twentieth birthday party last month (he is friend of Paula's).

我在上個月我的20歲生日派對上遇見他(他是Paula的朋友) .

He has long, dark hair and brown eyes, and looks terrific!

他有一頭又黑又長的頭髮和棕色的眼睛，看起來很棒﹗

Well, in traditional style for us Colombians, he picked me up exactly on time, at 7:00 p.m.

嗯，如同我們傳統的哥倫比亞人的典型，他準時晚上7︰00點整來接我

Of course, my parents had to ask him to come inside so he could introduce himself! 當然，我的父母邀請他進家門，讓他介紹他自己﹗

I think they approved because they smiled at him a lot!

我認為他們十分滿意，因為他們一直對著他微笑﹗

After they finished questioning him (poor thing), We left in his car and …

在他們詢問完他之後(可憐的他；可憐的東西) ,我們將搭他開的車時

guess what … he even opened the door for me to get in!

猜猜看，怎麼啦?！...他竟然幫我開車門耶﹗

And at the restaurant, he moved the chair for me to sit down.

還有ㄚ....在餐廳時，他幫我拉椅子，讓我坐下ㄛ。

What a gentleman!

多麼紳士的一個人ㄚ﹗

I like that, although as you know, it's not so common these days.

我喜歡那樣，然而...如你所知，在現今...那是如此的不常見。

參考資料： 自己