Blander Lee 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 1 0 年前

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How to survive in this earth that would change everyday? Ans: We have to let ourselves to absorb more information, knowledge, and world news. Because the earth would change every day, we need to change ourselves every day, too. To keep ourselves on the peak of information and technology is the most important work. That could prevent us to be a laggard in this era.

How can we prevent global warming? Ans: We must work on the foundation. To conserve our power sources, especially "oil". Take an example: "If the places' distance that we can go for our feet. We should walk to it." And try to invent new power sources is also an important program.

Anyway, we should improve our multifarious ability to help our help our future, help our country's future, and help our earth's future.

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  • 恐龍
    Lv 6
    1 0 年前
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    問題還不少,我一句話一句話幫你分析:

    How to survive in this earth that would change everyday?

    講到地球時,Earth的E要大寫,小寫的話是指泥土;建議改成Earth that changes everyday,因為would有大概,可能的意思,你要強調這件事,卻又不確定這件事會發生,似乎不合理。所以建議改成現在式,好像是在陳述一項事實。

    How to survive in this Earth that changes everyday?

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    Ans: We have to let ourselves to absorb more information, knowledge, and world news.

    let是使役動詞,後面接原形動詞,所以是let oursleves absorb...,把to去掉。

    Ans: We have to let ourselves absorb more information, knowledge and world (global) news.

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    Because the earth would change every day, we need to change ourselves every day, too.

    一樣Earth要大寫,would change改成changes。

    Because the Earth changes everyday, we need to change ourselves everyday, too.

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    To keep ourselves on the peak of information and technology is the most important work.

    我猜你想說"掌握資訊與科技",可以把 on the peak of改成 on top of;另外那一位大大說on track of也可以,有隨時注意的意思。

    To keep ourselves on top of information and technology is the most important work.

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    That could prevent us to be a laggard in this era.

    改成That can prevent us from falling behind in this era.

    這裡同樣建議把could改成can,因為could也是有大概的意思。prevent後面的介係詞是from,用法是prevent A from B(防止A發生B的狀況)。另外像上面那位大大說的一樣,laggard比較少用,fall behind就有落伍的意思。

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    How can we prevent global warming? Ans: We must work on the foundation. To conserve our power sources, especially "oil".

    我猜你想說"我們必須從基礎做起"。我建議改成We must start from the basics. work on是一個片語"進行"的意思,foundation是指房子的地基或者事情的根本,basic比較像是一件事的基本組成要件,所以用basics比較恰當。還有To後面這一段話不是完整的句子,但是可以跟前面一半組合在一起。還有我猜power source指的是能源,用energy比較恰當。所以整句改成:

    How can we prevent global warming? Ans: We must start from the basics, such as to conserve energy, especially oil.

    2007-10-27 01:10:06 補充:

    And try to invent new power sources is also an important program.

    同一句話只能有一個動詞。你這裡有兩個try和is。還有invent是發明一件原來沒有的東西,可是能源是原來就存在的東西,所以用invent不太適當,建議用find找出。整句可以改成:

    To try (或Trying) to find a new energy is also an important program.

    2007-10-27 01:10:44 補充:

    Anyway, we should improve our multifarious ability to help our help our future, help our country's future, and help our earth's future.

    動詞同樣都是help,只需要寫一個就可以,後面兩個可以省略:

    Anyway, we should improve our multifarious ability to help our future, our country's future and the Earth's future.

    2007-10-27 01:11:16 補充:

    以上是我的建議,請參考^^y

    參考資料: 3年的中英文翻譯經驗以及Yahoo字典
  • ?
    Lv 7
    1 0 年前

    檢查文法就包括與法和寫法都檢查嘍 .....

    敝人從事國貿多年, 從來不會去評價應英文寫得對不對; 只會相互提攜寄望英文寫作的能力可以慢慢提昇.

    一些意見供您參考一下:

    How to survive in this earth that would change everyday? Ans: We have to let ourselves to absorb more information, knowledge, and world news. Because the earth would change every day, we need to change ourselves every day, too. To keep ourselves on the peak of information and technology is the most important work. That could prevent us to be a laggard in this era.

    How to survive in this earth that would change everyday? Ans: We have to let ourselves absorbing (已經有to let了, 這邊就避免用to absorb) more information, knowledge, and global (world在這裡會比較死板一點, 牽扯到News, 我們一般會用Global) news. Because the earth would change every day, we need to change ourselves every day, too. To keep ourselves on track (the peak訊息比較難追到高峰, 好像也不太常這樣用, keep it on track比較常用) of information and technology is the most important work. That could prevent us to be a laggard (people) in this era.

    That could prevent us becoming a laggard (people) in this era.

    That could prevent us falling behind in this era.

    Laggard當然可以做名詞來用, 不過真的真的很少人用這個字當名詞. 要嘛在這裡就當形容詞來用吧.

    How can we prevent global warming? Ans: We must work on the foundation. To conserve our power sources, especially "oil". For (Take an instance) example: "If the (places’) distance that we can go on foot (for our feet), we should walk (to it)." And try to invent new power sources is also an important program.

    Anyway, we should improve our abundant (multifarious) ability to (help our) help our future, help the future of our country('s future), and help the future of earth('s future).

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