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“The stability of a society depends on how it responds to the extremes of human behavior.”

Why the Middle East Wars would happen just for religious problems? Why the Iran-Iraq War would outbreak just for petroleum of natural sources? Why the World War Ⅱ would burst just for racism Adolf Hitler providing? The above statements, in addition to a government lacking in abilities and a leader making unwitty decision, we can find out that an unstable society contains a grope of people having extremes of thoughts and action.

If people conduct radical behavior causing unstable societies leading to a nation’s disturbance influencing indirect the peace of other country, finally the tragedies in everywhere we can see such as suicide attacks of the September 11, 2001 attacks. The terrorists, a little of people, didn’t be halted immediately by the government at first, so not only Iraq were afraid of revenging by America but also the politics, economics and securities in America were frustrated by people’s trepidation.

If we had token some actions to stop and afford re-education after discovering the extremes of activities of people in the beginning, then terrorist organizations would not have formed and developed their power increasingly. The patients with cancer causing by tumors can be survive, if we treat tumors with various of medicines initially, and the recovery rate may reach one hundred percentage; on contrary, the patients my die, if we take tumors as nothing until realizing nothing we can do anymore finally, and the rate, zero percentage.

Hence, we learned from in the Iraq War arose by extremes of people; furthermore, we should stop the extremes; meanwhile, to teach them. Although, a stable society depends on human behavior, a stable society also relies on education firstly.

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    Why did the Middle East Wars happen just for religious confrontations? Why did the Iran-Iraq War outbreak just for natural resources such as petroleum? Why did the World War Ⅱ burst just for Adolf Hitler's racism? Observing the above situations, in addition to a government's lacking abilities and a leader's making unwitty decisions, we can find out that an unstable society would contain a group of people who are having extreme thoughts and behavior.

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    2007-10-24 01:27:58 補充:

    If people behaves radically then they could cause societies unsatable and could create disturbance in a nation whwich would influence indirectly the peace of other countries. There are tragedies everywhere. For example, as we all saw what happened, the suicide attacks on September 11, 2001. .

    2007-10-24 01:28:05 補充:

    The consquence was due to the terrorists, just a small group of people, were not be halted immediately by the government at the begining. As a result, not only Iraq was afraid of been revenged by America but also the American's politics, economics and securities were in a state of some trepidation.

    2007-10-24 12:31:05 補充:

    If we had token some actions to stop and to re-educate these people after discovering the possibilites of extremes of activities in them from beginning, then terrorist organizations would not have been formed and would not have developed their power increasingly.

    2007-10-24 12:31:54 補充:

    The cancer patients, caused by tumors, can survive if we treated tumors with various medicines initially, and the recovery rate may reach one hundred percent. Contrary to the traeatment, the patients might die, if we thought tumors is nothing harmful until too late, then the cure rate is zero.

    2007-10-24 12:40:51 補充:

    We have learned that the Iraq War was arisen by extremes of people; heence, we should stop the extremes; meanwhile, to educate them. The stability of a society depends on how it responds to the extremes of human behavior, moreover, a stable society also relies on education firstly.

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