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英文高手請進,幫我修改一下我的文章

以下是中英對照的部分,只要幫我修改一下英文,最好能縮短一點,因為這要背起來,太長會背的很辛苦....

千萬不要用翻譯軟體喔!!!切記..

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我負責的部分是拜神和迎親。

中國人尊敬鬼神。 所以男方會在婚禮前拜神祈禱婚禮順利完成。

男方必須事先準備兩張桌子。 一張是拜神桌,另一張是擺放供品的桌子,以及金紙。

然後在結婚典禮前,花童要和新郎去女方家。迎親包含壓床、拜別父母、以及當禮車移動時,女方主婚人持1碗水潑出去,意即嫁出去的女兒如潑出去的水,不要再回來。

迎親有些禁忌,例如:在迎娶途中,如禮車和別人的禮車相遇,叫[喜沖喜],可以燃放鞭炮或由各方媒人交換花朵,據說可以化解不祥。

My responsible part is Worship Gods and before the marriage ceremony.

The Chinese people respect Gods and ghosts. They will worship to the Gods and pray for the perfect wedding.

The groom's family must prepare two kinds of table. There are worships the gods table、offering table and the Spirit Money for the Gods.

Then before the marriage ceremonies, the flower boy and girl with groom will go to the bride’s house. Before the marriage ceremony include the groom’s family will find a boy born in the year of the dragon to sleep with the groom、blessings and the best wishes for parents and when the wedding cars move, The bride’s mother holds or a bowl that is filled with water. She pours water on the ground near the door of the house, mean the daughter who marries don't come back again like water that is splashed out.

In the wedding, there are a lot of taboos. We should avoid doing these things. There are some taboos below, example: it seems to be unlucky if the wedding car convoy meets another wedding car convoy. If it happens you should set off some fireworks or have the two matchmakers meet and exchange flowers.

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  • Tosh
    Lv 6
    1 0 年前
    最佳解答

    The parts I am responsible for are worshiping of Gods and pre-marriage ceremony.

    Chinese people respect Gods and ghosts, as such they pray to the Gods for a perfect wedding.

    Thegroom's family must prepare two tables beforehand, one for prayers, and one for offerings and spirit money.

    Before the wedding ceremony, the page boy and flower girl must go with the groom to the bride's residence. Pre-marriage ceremony includes (1) groom's family getting a boy born in the year of the dragon to sleepwith the groom, (2) bidding farewell to the parents, and (3) bride's mother pouring a bowl of water when the wedding car is departing, to signify that a married daughter will not come back just as the poured water.

    There are many taboos during the wedding that should beavoided. For example, it is said to be unlucky if a wedding car meets another wedding car. To reconcile, one can set off fireworks or have matchmakers from both sides exchange flowers.

    2007-10-24 11:49:42 補充:

    There are many taboos during the wedding that should beavoided.

    抱歉少了一個空格,應該是be avoided

    這種文章盡量不要用we, you, us等等的

    盡量用敘述的語氣會比較好歐^^

    參考資料: 希望有幫到你, 絕對不用翻譯機
  • 1 0 年前

    My part is about worshiping Gods and the process of escorting the bride

    to the groom's house before the wedding ceremony.

    The Chinese people respect Gods and ghosts a lot . So they will worship

    the Gods to pray for the perfect wedding.

    The groom's family will prepare two tables. One is to worship the gods

    and the other is set to place offerings and the Spirit Money.

    And then the groom, the flower boy and girl will leave for the bride's

    house.

    Besides, the groom’s family will find a boy born in the year of the

    dragon to sleep with the groom, which symblolizes the blessing for the

    new couple.

    And after saying good-bye to bride's parents, the bride’s mother will

    plash the water to the near gound while the wedding car is leaving.

    It means the marrying daughter shouldn't come back and marry again, which is just like the water on the ground that it cound't returen to the bowl.

    This custom represents the blessing for the bride that she should have a happy life in her busband' s house and will not need to come back her

    houlse for help.

    In the wedding, there are also a lot of taboos which should be avoided. For example, it seems to be unlucky if the wedding car convoy meets another ones.

    If it happens, you could set off some fireworks or have the two matchmakers meet and exchange flowers. Then it would turn the badness into good forturne.

    參考資料:
  • Carole
    Lv 6
    1 0 年前

    The part that I am responsible for worships and send a party to escort the bride to the groom's homes. Chinese people respect Gods and ghosts, so they will worship the Gods and praying for the perfect wedding.

    The groom's family must prepare two tables. There are worships the gods table、offering table and the Spirit Money for the Gods.

    Before the wedding starts, the kids with flowers will go to the bride’s house with groom. And there are some customs of wedding: the groom’s family will find a boy born in the year of the dragon to sleep with the groom、blessings and the best wishes for parents and when the wedding cars move, The bride’s mother holds a bowl that is filled with water. She pours water on the ground near the door of the house, means the daughter who gets married don't come back again like water that is splashed out.

    We have some taboos of the wedding. We should avoid doing these things. For example: it seems to be unlucky if the wedding car meets another wedding car. If it happened, you could fire some fireworks or the two matchmakers they exchange their flowers to make the bad lucky disappear.

    我有改了,你參考看看吧!^^

    2007-10-24 11:07:07 補充:

    若這篇是要口說的,那其實你不需太在意你的文法,因外國人其實都還聽得懂我們所講的英語,且你寫的這篇算還不錯,我也都看得懂啊^^加油啦

    參考資料: 我, 我
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