It's a story about a ugly guy, who been called elephant man. Without any
earn a living's skill, he was in a malevolent shopkeeper's care. Treat
him as an animal in the zoo for people watching, and make money for this.
At some time's carnival, the shopkeeper earns enough money, and
abandon him. Not to have a single penny left on, the elephant man to
toss and turn to come to London Hospital. Owing to the kind doctor and
chair man's help, he can living in the London Hospital. Under this
well-meaning doctor's coddle, as time goes by, his maimed spirit little
by little to open. And to get to know with a lots of friends.
- 沛淇Lv 51 0 年前最佳解答
This is a story about an ugly guy who was called the elephant man.
Without any living skill, he was taken by a malevolent shopkeeper who let people watching him as an animal and made money by this.
in one's care在文法上是正確的，但個人覺得這裡用take比較適合。
At one carnival, the shopkeeper made enough money and abandoned him.
The elephant man having no money has gone to London Hospital after many sufferings.
Owing to the helps of the kind doctor and the president of the hospital, he could live in the London Hospital.
醫院的院長「president of the hospital」。
Under the well-meaning doctor's care, as time goes by, his hurt mind was little by little to open.
was，請記得加動詞。不過我會比較偏好用「His hurt mind was opened little by little.」。
He also got to know many friends and had great memories going to the theater and living in a rural area.
Everything was so wonderful, but the god of destiny stopped all these cruelly…參考資料： 個人淺見，希望對你有幫助。
- 1 0 年前
This is about the ugly person's story, everybody calls him --- likely
the person. Any has not made a living skill he, by a badnessHeart store boss gives shelter to, regards as him the animal to watch
for the person and to take advantage of this seeks profit. In a
touring, Boss made the foot money and has abandoned him. The body non- single
cent elephant person went through many places arrived the London
hospital, in good intention doctor and under chief's help, enabled him
to settle down in the hospital. Again under this doctor's devotedly
attendance, along with time passing, mind, Under the long help, enables him to settle down in the hospital. Again
under this doctor's devotedly attendance, along with time passing, the
mind he which creates can finally also 夠 gradually open the happy
door leaf, but also has known many friends. And stayed behind saw a
play to the theater with to the village housing happy recollection..
All change so happily, god of the destiny actually brutal lets all
these abruptly參考資料： 我