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請幫忙翻譯一下這篇摘要,中翻英。

這是{象人}的摘要,小弟自己寫的,不過必須是英文的。但是小弟英文拙劣,翻了一部

分,希望高手幫忙修改時態或是用詞不正確的地方ORZ....附上中文,請高手幫忙><|||

感激不盡!!

這是一個關於醜人的故事,大家都稱他為---象人。沒有任何謀生技能的他,被一個壞

心的商店老闆收留,將他當成動物般供人觀賞並且藉此謀利。在一次的巡迴演出中,

老闆賺足了錢並拋棄了他。身無分文的象人輾轉來到了倫敦醫院,在好心的醫生及院

長的幫忙之下,讓他能在醫院定居。再這位醫生的悉心照顧之下,隨著時間過往,心靈

受創的他終於也能夠漸漸的敞開心扉,還結識了許多朋友。並留下了到戲院看戲與到

鄉村居住的美好回憶...一切都變得如此美好,命運之神卻殘酷的讓這一切嘎然而止...

我翻譯的,如下:

It's a story about a ugly guy, who been called elephant man. Without any

earn a living's skill, he was in a malevolent shopkeeper's care. Treat

him as an animal in the zoo for people watching, and make money for this.

At some time's carnival, the shopkeeper earns enough money, and

abandon him. Not to have a single penny left on, the elephant man to

toss and turn to come to London Hospital. Owing to the kind doctor and

chair man's help, he can living in the London Hospital. Under this

well-meaning doctor's coddle, as time goes by, his maimed spirit little

by little to open. And to get to know with a lots of friends.

後面我就不太會翻譯了,請高手不吝指正!!

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  • 沛淇
    Lv 5
    1 0 年前
    最佳解答

    這是一個關於醜人的故事,大家都稱他為---象人。

    This is a story about an ugly guy who was called the elephant man.

      因為是presentation,用this會比it好一點。

      a-->an,因為後面是母音開頭的字。

      who前面沒有逗點,因為是限定的關係代名詞。

      been是be動詞的pp,請用動詞;或是用has been。

      因為是專有名詞,建議大寫或加冠詞the。

    沒有任何謀生技能的他,被一個壞心的商店老闆收留, 將他當成動物般供人觀賞並且藉此謀利。

    Without any living skill, he was taken by a malevolent shopkeeper who let people watching him as an animal and made money by this.

      living可以當形容詞用,不用加動詞和所有格的s。

      in one's care在文法上是正確的,但個人覺得這裡用take比較適合。

      用who把兩句變一句,順便限定此壞心老闆是哪一個。

      make-->made,過去式。

      for-->by,「靠」那賺錢不是「為了」那賺錢。

    在一次的巡迴演出中,老闆賺足了錢並拋棄了他。

    At one carnival, the shopkeeper made enough money and abandoned him.

      some time-->one,earn-->made,個人覺得較合原意。

      abandon-->abandoned,過去式。

      and前不用逗點,因為主詞是同一個。

    身無分文的象人「歷經苦難後」來到了倫敦醫院,

    The elephant man having no money has gone to London Hospital after many sufferings.

      抱歉,我不會翻「輾轉」,XD。

    在好心的醫生及院長的幫忙之下,讓他能在醫院定居。

    Owing to the helps of the kind doctor and the president of the hospital, he could live in the London Hospital.

      醫院的院長「president of the hospital」。

      把help放在前面純屬個人習慣。

      can-->could,過去式;can/could後面要加原型動詞。

    再這位醫生的悉心照顧之下,隨著時間過往,心靈受創的他終於也能夠漸漸的敞開心扉,

    Under the well-meaning doctor's care, as time goes by, his hurt mind was little by little to open.

      this ->the,這裡只有一位醫生,this感覺會出現一個that。

      coddle是動詞,可以用care或nurse(可當名詞用)。

      maimed->hurt,spirit->mind,個人覺得較合原意。

      was,請記得加動詞。不過我會比較偏好用「His hurt mind was opened little by little.」。

    還結識了許多朋友,並留下了到戲院看戲與到鄉村居住的美好回憶。

    He also got to know many friends and had great memories going to the theater and living in a rural area.

    ...一切都變得如此美好,命運之神卻殘酷的讓這一切嘎然而止...

    Everything was so wonderful, but the god of destiny stopped all these cruelly…

    參考資料: 個人淺見,希望對你有幫助。
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  • 1 0 年前

    This is about the ugly person's story, everybody calls him --- likely

    the person. Any has not made a living skill he, by a badnessHeart store boss gives shelter to, regards as him the animal to watch

    for the person and to take advantage of this seeks profit. In a

    touring, Boss made the foot money and has abandoned him. The body non- single

    cent elephant person went through many places arrived the London

    hospital, in good intention doctor and under chief's help, enabled him

    to settle down in the hospital. Again under this doctor's devotedly

    attendance, along with time passing, mind, Under the long help, enables him to settle down in the hospital. Again

    under this doctor's devotedly attendance, along with time passing, the

    mind he which creates can finally also 夠 gradually open the happy

    door leaf, but also has known many friends. And stayed behind saw a

    play to the theater with to the village housing happy recollection..

    All change so happily, god of the destiny actually brutal lets all

    these abruptly

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