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This is tea preserved plum. Many people like or not like. Because it is sour but I will OK. Is delicious.

Every family has tea preserved plum. this is a tradition a snack

Plum is stone food. careful Eat plum spit out the stone

Plums are a fruit that can be eaten in many ways: as a meal with rice, as a dessert, or even by themselves as a snack. Not only are they tasty, they help digestion and prevent motion sickness.

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  • 1 0 年前
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    This is tea preserved plum. Some people like it some people don't. Although it is sour but I am okay with it, and it tastes delicious.

    Most of families have tea preserved plum as their snack.

    Plum is solid food, have to be careful when eating and spit out the core.

    Plum is kind of fruit that can be eaten in many ways: can be a meal with rice, dessert or snack.

    Not only they are tasteful but also help digestion and prevent motion sickness.

    我依照你原意修改部份的文法及用詞咩, 希望您喜歡囉!

    參考資料: me
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    1 0 年前

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    This is preserved tea plum. Some people like while others don't. It is sour, but I think it is delicious.

    Every family has preserved tea plum. This is a traditional snack.

    Plum is a kind of stone food. Be careful when eating it and spit out the stone.

    Plum is the fruit that can be eaten in many ways: as a flavor with rice, as a dessert, or even by itself as a snack. Not only is it tasty, it helps digestion and prevent or ease the motion sickness.

    參考資料: My English Erudition
  • 1 0 年前

    This is tea preserved plum. Some people like it some people don't. Although it is sour but I am okay with it, and it tastes delicious.

    Most of families have tea preserved plum as their snack.

    Plum is solid food, have to be careful when eating and spit out the core.

    Plum is kind of fruit that can be eaten in many ways: can be a meal with rice, dessert or snack.

    Not only they are tasteful but also help digestion and prevent motion sickness.

    我只是copy樓上大大的,希望妳喜歡囉

  • 1 0 年前

    This is tea-preserved plum. Some people like it but some others not. Although it is sour, but for me, it's delicious.

    Every family has tea-preserved plum. This is sort of our traditional snack. Plum has a core inside. You have to eat it carefully and spit out the core.

    Plum is a kind of fruit that can be eaten in many ways: Eat it with rice as a meal, or eat it as dessert, or even eat it as snack. Not only plums are tasty, they also help digestion and prevent motion sickness.

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