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匿名使用者 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 1 0 年前

幫我改一下英文文章

My job

My name is Phone Lin. I am a teacher of after school classes. I work in the Johnny’s cram school. When I arrive cram school, I must clean the classroom everyday. I keep order in my class and help the student to finish their homework. Sometime, when students didn’t go to the cram school that I call their parents. Johnny’s is a elementary cram school that student have to do their homework or to review the lesson. Sometimes, they learn all kinds of talents. At present, I don’t like my job because I have much work waiting for me to do. After graduation, I hope I would be able to find a good job.

PS:這是介紹我的工作~時態我不知道是要用過去還是現在...介紹現在的工作...請高手幫我改一下

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  • 匿名使用者
    1 0 年前
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    I made a few changes...

    My name is Phone Lin and I am a teacher of after school classes. I work at Johnny's cram school. When I get to work, I must clean the classroom everyday. I keep order in my class and help the students to finish their homework. Sometimes, when the students didn't show up in their classes, I call their parents. Johnny's is a elementary cram school that students have to do their homework or to review their lessons. They also get to learn all kinds of other skills. At present, I don't like my job because I have too much work to do. After graduation, I hope I would be able to find a better job.

    參考資料: I'm an ESL tutor...
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  • 1 0 年前

    我不是高手,但我試試看哦....

    My name is Phone Lin. I am an assistant teacher of the Johnny's cram school. Everyday When I attend to the Johnny's, I must clean up the classrooms first. Then I have to keep order in my classroom and help the students finish their homeworks. Sometimes there will be a few students in absence, all I have to do is to call up their parents. The Johnny's is a cram school for age of 7 to 12. So I help them to finish their homeworks completely. In leisure time the children could practice their new accomplishment. I don't really like this job at present, because there's too much work assigned to me. I do hope to get a more interesting job after my graduating from college(university).

    參考資料: 嘔心瀝血.....
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