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請英文高手幫幫忙,看文法有沒有錯誤?((20點!!急!!))

E-commerce is the present popular tendency, it is able to efficient way of utilizing tourism.

In the past, tour operators communicated information mostly pervious to the phone、a fax and print media. It’s not only wasted time but also wasted cost.

However, e-commerce will use to advertisement and marketing, customers can booking a ticket and planning the journey by oneself in the internet, so reduce the booking procedures of complexity.

The information and the internet were getting faster and faster, improve the travel production, let the customers have more selectivity. package tour and backpack tour are the best choice.

The customers usually can consider the price. After all, customers do care about the prices!

And that the quality the more important, because the customers hoped can feel the good service, the service includes both scenic spot introduction、shopping service、 tax refund and arrangement of accommodations, goes abroad also can play happy fun.

幫我訂正文法,若有需要省略或增加的句子可以更通順也沒關係!!

謝謝!!!感激不盡!!

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  • 1 0 年前
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    原文不清楚,所以必須猜想裏面意思,才能改正:

    E-commerce is the present popular tendency, it is able to efficient way of utilizing tourism.

    >>E-commerce is getting more and more popular nowadays. It is an efficient way to stimulate the development of tourism.

    In the past, tour operators communicated information mostly pervious to the phone、a fax and print media. It’s not only wasted time but also wasted cost.

    >> In the past, travel agents used to do their business through making phone calls, faxes and printed materials. It was both a waste of time and money.

    However, e-commerce will use to advertisement and marketing, customers can booking a ticket and planning the journey by oneself in the internet, so reduce the booking procedures of complexity.

    >> Since the emergence of e-commerce which enables advertising and marketing through the internet, customers can now book their tickets and plan the trips online, making the booking procedures much simpler.

    The information and the internet were getting faster and faster, improve the travel production, let the customers have more selectivity. package tour and backpack tour are the best choice.

    >> With the improvement of speed, information can be transferred much faster through the internet, benefitting the tourist industry. Potential travellers are now offered with more choices, with package tour and backpack tour being the most popular ones.

    The customers usually can consider the price. After all, customers do care about the prices!

    >> Price is always an important factor when customers make their decisions.

    And that the quality the more important, because the customers hoped can feel the good service, the service includes both scenic spot introduction、shopping service、 tax refund and arrangement of accommodations, goes abroad also can play happy fun.

    >> Nevertheless, quality is even more of their concern. Good service, including a proper arrangment of sightseeing, shopping, tax refunds and accomodations, all contribute to an unforgettable journey.

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