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E-commerce is the present popular tendency, it is able to efficient way of utilizing tourism. In the past, tour operators communicated information mostly pervious to the phone、a fax and print media. It’s not only wasted time but also wasted cost. However, e-commerce will use to advertisement and... 顯示更多 E-commerce is the present popular tendency, it is able to efficient way of utilizing tourism.

In the past, tour operators communicated information mostly pervious to the phone、a fax and print media. It’s not only wasted time but also wasted cost.

However, e-commerce will use to advertisement and marketing, customers can booking a ticket and planning the journey by oneself in the internet, so reduce the booking procedures of complexity.

The information and the internet were getting faster and faster, improve the travel production, let the customers have more selectivity. package tour and backpack tour are the best choice.

The customers usually can consider the price. After all, customers do care about the prices!

And that the quality the more important, because the customers hoped can feel the good service, the service includes both scenic spot introduction、shopping service、 tax refund and arrangement of accommodations, goes abroad also can play happy fun.




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