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請大家幫我改一下我自已寫的英文文章~(很急)

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(題目):I love singing for three reasons

In my busy school life, I always have a lot of pressure. When I have leisure time, I often sing a song to express my feelings. Why do I love singing? I have three reasons to share with you.

The first reason is I can learn different kinds of language naturally. Such as English, Japanese, Taiwanese and Hakka. At the very beginning, I only like to sing Chinese songs. But I discover other languages can also touch my heart deeply. I don’t study other languages especially. But I can understand different pronouncing ways from foreign languages naturally.

Another reason is singing can relax my stressful life. Sometimes homework and examination will let me out of breath. As a result, singing is my favorite activity in my free time. When I sing a song selflessly, my pressure and weary are all clear off. Then I have a comfortable feeling in my heart.

The final reason is relatives and classmates give me positive encouragement. Before I contact singing, I lack confidence in myself. Until relatives and classmates discover my singing performance is pretty excellent, they just approve my singing strength. They support me to join some singing contests. Although my strength isn’t good enough, I have more confidence.

Up to the present, singing is my greatest interest. It is not only enrich my life, but also changed my shy personality. It had already my second life, I will not give up it.

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  • Carrie
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    1 0 年前
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    I love singing for three reasons

    In my busy school life, I always have a lot of pressure. When I have free time, I often sing songs to express my feelings. Why do I love singing? There are three reasons to share with you.

    First, I can learn different languages, such as English, Japanese, Taiwanese, and Hakka, naturally through singing songs. In the very beginning, I only liked to sing Chinese songs, but, afterwards, I discovered that other languages could also touch my heart deeply. I didn’t particularly study them, but I understood different ways of pronunciations of foreign languages naturally.

    In addition, singing relaxes my stressful life. Sometimes, I feel like suffocated because of homework and examinations. When I sing selflessly, my pressure and tiredness will be all gone. Then, I will feel comfortable. As a result, singing becomes my favorite activity in my free time.

    Finally, my relatives and classmates give me positive encouragement. Before I started singing, I was not confident. However, my relatives and classmates discovered that my singing performance was pretty excellent, and they supported me to take part in some singing contests. Although I was not good enough, I gained more confidence on myself.

    So far, singing is my favorite hobby. It not only enriches my life but also changes my shy personality. It has already become a part of my life. I will not give it up.

    不敢說自己寫的好不好

    但建議樓上的兩位大大注意一下句子的時態。

    建議寫的時候,不要用中文來想,直接用簡單的英文句型來想,可能會比較好一點~~

    參考參考囉!

    參考資料: me
  • 1 0 年前

    I love singing for three reasons.

    In my busy school life, I always have a lot of pressure. When I have free time, I often sing a song to express my feelings. Why do I love singing? I have three reasons to share with you.

    The first reason is I can learn different languages naturally such as English, Japanese, Taiwanese and Hakka. At the very beginning, I only like to sing Chinese songs. But then I discover that other languages can also touch my heart deeply. I don’t study them. But, I can recognize their sounds naturally.

    The second reason is singing can release my pressure. You know, sometimes school’s homework and examinations really make me stressed out. According to that, singing has become my favorite activity in my free time. When I sing a song, my pressure and tiredness are all washed off, which really make me feel comfortable.

    The third reason is that my relatives and classmates encourage me and give me positive reactions. Before I started singing, I lack of confidence. Thanks to them- discover my potential of singing- I can do what I like and am capable of now. They supported me to take part in some singing contests. Although my ability isn’t good enough, I have more confidence.

    Until now, singing is still one of my biggest interests. It doesn’t only enrich my life, but also change my introverted personality. It is almost like my second life! I will not give it up for anything!

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    我每一段都有做一些結構上的修改,你參考一下吧!

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    ※ 奇幻小說連載---弱者的復仇

    http://www.wretch.cc/blog/LoisKent

    參考資料: 自己
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