送報的 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 1 0 年前

麻煩跟我說這幾句文法有無錯誤 和 訂正他 拜託了

筐筐裡的單字 要留下來 其他文法錯誤 麻煩幫忙訂正

有4題

「step into」

I get ready 「step into」 this world

我準備好邁向這世界

「awfully」

Without politeness the person is 「awfully」.

沒有禮貌的人是令人厭惡的

「porridge」

A plate of delicious「porridge」on the table is my favourite breakfast.

餐桌上這一盤可口的麥片粥是我最愛的早餐

How many characters in the story?

Q: The story have Girlie、papa bear、mama bear and baby bear is four characters.

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  • 1 0 年前
    最佳解答

    My suggestion as follows:

    「step into」

    I am ready to step into this world.

    我準備好邁向這世界

    「awfully」

    Without politeness, people look 「awfully」.

    沒有禮貌的人是令人厭惡的

    「porridge」

    A plate of delicious「porridge」on the table is my favourite breakfast.

    餐桌上這一盤可口的麥片粥是我最愛的早餐

    How many characters in the story?

    Q: There are four characters in the story, including Girlie、papa bear、mama bear and baby bear.

  • 1 0 年前

    我絕德這句

    「porridge」

    A plate of delicious「porridge」on the table is my favourite breakfast.

    餐桌上這一盤可口的麥片粥是我最愛的早餐

    這句的冠詞要改成The

    然後最後一句應該要是

    How many characters in the story?

    Q: There are four characters in the story, Girlie, papa bear, mama bear and baby bear.

    數字方面做的很好因為你把它拼出來了,美國人習慣把數字1~10用英文拼出來,然後11以上可以用阿拉伯數字

    希望有幫到你^^

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