能幫我檢查這段英文文法有錯誤嗎?

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Hi, I'm jazz; I'm a Pontiac solstice (龐帝克)car.

I'm the coolest transformer; my motto is “If by doing everything necessarily you need to be well-behaved, and not just be handsome and cool, and then don't do it.”

I can become a jet fighter and the high speed to fly its very easy to me.

I can become a cell phone, a real cell phone, its use 3rd generation system, and the more important thing is I support Blue tooth Headset too. And I can also become an animal, just like chicken, look at me! Be like a true chicken, very tasty! But, don't eat me!

麻煩英文厲害的幫我檢查一下文法還有用詞方面有無錯誤~拜託了><

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最佳解答

Hi, I'm jazz. I am also a Pontiac solstice (龐帝克)car.

With the coolest transformer my motto is “On doing everything compulsorily you need to be well-behaved, instead of just being handsome and cool, and then nothing is done.”

I can become a jet fighter and easily flying with high speed.

I can become a cell phone, a real cell phone with 3rd generation system, and, more importantly in supporting Blue tooth Headset also. Meanwhile I can also become an animal, just like chicken and everyone looks at me, being like a true chicken and looked tasty! But, just don't eat me!

參考資料： Self