John Connor 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 1 0 年前

Self-Introduction英作文檢查??

Self-Introduction

My name is Wayne Wang.I am from Tainan.I am twenty years old.I have lived in Taipei ever since I became a senior high school student four years ago.

My interest is play computer game.Especially On-line game. My favorite game is R.O. It is come from Korea but popular in Taiwan and there are many people love to play. Every weekend or holiday .I like play R.O. with my friends.

On the other. I also like to go out with my friends. Sometimes, I go to park with my dog. His name is Kitty and he is very cute. Everyone like him.

Fanilly, I think I am a good man but I am also a popular man.

請大家幫我檢察一下 , 順便告訴我哪裡文法不通,或哪裡應該要改善一下,謝謝

已更新項目:

http://tw.knowledge.yahoo.com/question/question?qi...

請跟這篇作文作比較!!那篇比較好??好在哪??謝謝

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  • 1 0 年前
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    My name is Wayne Wang. I am from Tainan (and) I am twenty years old. I have (been living) in Taipei ever since I became a senior high school student four years ago.

    My (hobby) is (playing) computer (games), especially On-line (games). My favorite game is R.O. It (came) from Korea but (is still) popular in Taiwan and there are many people (who) love (playing it). (On) every weekend or holiday, I like (to) play R.O. with my friends.

    I also like to go out with my friends. Sometimes, I (would go and walk my dog in the park). His name is Kitty and is very cute. Everyone (likes) him.

    (Finally), I think I am a good man (who is also popular with people).

    兩篇自我介紹都不錯只是另一篇比較像是在介紹 "My Family and I"

    所以如果你要 "Self Introduction" 這一篇是比較好.

    希望有幫助!

    參考資料: 住在國外的我!
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