My name is Wayne Wang.I am from Tainan.I am twenty years old.I have lived in Taipei ever since I became a senior high school student four years ago.
My interest is play computer game.Especially On-line game. My favorite game is R.O. It is come from Korea but popular in Taiwan and there are many people love to play. Every weekend or holiday .I like play R.O. with my friends.
On the other. I also like to go out with my friends. Sometimes, I go to park with my dog. His name is Kitty and he is very cute. Everyone like him.
Fanilly, I think I am a good man but I am also a popular man.
請大家幫我檢察一下 , 順便告訴我哪裡文法不通,或哪裡應該要改善一下,謝謝
- 1 0 年前最佳解答
My name is Wayne Wang. I am from Tainan (and) I am twenty years old. I have (been living) in Taipei ever since I became a senior high school student four years ago.
My (hobby) is (playing) computer (games), especially On-line (games). My favorite game is R.O. It (came) from Korea but (is still) popular in Taiwan and there are many people (who) love (playing it). (On) every weekend or holiday, I like (to) play R.O. with my friends.
I also like to go out with my friends. Sometimes, I (would go and walk my dog in the park). His name is Kitty and is very cute. Everyone (likes) him.
(Finally), I think I am a good man (who is also popular with people).
兩篇自我介紹都不錯只是另一篇比較像是在介紹 "My Family and I"
所以如果你要 "Self Introduction" 這一篇是比較好.