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輝弘 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 1 0 年前

幫我看看有哪裡錯誤 part1

嗨!我是Vicky。我的家人有爸爸、媽媽、還有我。

Hi, I'm Vicky. My family have father、mother and me.

今天早上坐在沙發上,看著電視。

Today I sat on the sofa watching the television.

媽媽穿著拖鞋從廚房中拿著早餐出來。

The mother wears slippers to take breakfast to come out from the kitchen.

看著櫃子上面的時間已經7:10分,該準備出發去學校了。

Seeing the clock on the cupboard already 7:10 Should prepared to set out to the school.

到學校後進了教室,接著就去操場集會

When to school juniors classroom, immediately after go to the drill ground hold a meeting

集會結束後,老師從辦公室帶著一位轉學生到教室。

After holding a meeting be over, the teacher brings a transfer to classroom from the office.

下課時我帶著轉學生到校園參觀環境。

I take transfer to campus to visit environment while classing dismiss.

我跟他介紹了,體育館,醫護室,自助餐廳,實驗室。

I introuduced with him, gymnasium, cure to protect room, cafeteria, laboratory.

中午放學,離開校門我帶著她到公園玩。

After school, come out the schoolgate. I bring her to play in park.

在公園,和他一起玩盪鞦韆、蹺蹺版、搖搖馬、溜滑梯。

Play on a swing together with him at the park, See-saw,Rocking horse, slide

玩累了就在大樹下和涼亭下面休息。

Play tired take a rest below the big tree and kiosk

直到公廁旁的路燈亮了,才離開公園。

Had been playing till Streetlight bright at the side of Public bathroom just leave park然後我去車站等爸爸一起回家。

Then I go to Train station. wait father goes home together

我坐在商店旁的椅子上面等著爸爸

I sit chair beside the shop waits for father

看到爸爸從月台走出出入口

See father coming out Doorway from the platform

就跑上前去迎接爸爸,跟著爸爸一起回家。

Run up to left for to greet father, follow father to go home together

到家後爸爸說明天要帶我去動物園。

After coming home father SAY TOMORROW want to TAKE me go to zoo

After going home, the father SAY that bring me to the zoo tomorrow

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  • weiwei
    Lv 4
    1 0 年前
    最佳解答

    嗨!我是Vicky。我的家人有爸爸、媽媽、還有我。

    Hi, I'm Vicky. And my family consists of my father, mother and myself.

    今天早上坐在沙發上,看著電視。

    I sat on the couch to watch TV this morning.

    媽媽穿著拖鞋從廚房中拿著早餐出來。

    My mother came out of the kitchen with breakfast while wearing her slippers.

    看著櫃子上面的時間已經7:10分,該準備出發去學校了。

    I prepared to go to school when the clock on top of the cabinet displayed 7:10.

    到學校後進了教室,接著就去操場集會

    I quickly went to the oval to attend assembly after I went to my classroom.

    集會結束後,老師從辦公室帶著一位轉學生到教室。

    Once the assembly was over, the teacher brought a transferred student from his/her staffroom to our classroom.

    下課時我帶著轉學生到校園參觀環境。

    I gave the transferred student a tour around the school when our class was over.

    我跟他介紹了,體育館,醫護室,自助餐廳,實驗室。

    I showed him our gymnasium, nurse's office, cafeteria and the laboratory.

    中午放學,離開校門我帶著她到公園玩。

    After school, I took her to a park to play.

    在公園,和他一起玩盪鞦韆、蹺蹺版、搖搖馬、溜滑梯。

    We played on swings, see-saws, rocking horses and slides in the park.

    玩累了就在大樹下和涼亭下面休息。

    Once we got tired from playing, we rested under a big tree and a shelter.

    直到公廁旁的路燈亮了,才離開公園。

    We only decided to leave the park after realizing it was getting too late as the street lights beside the public toilet was turned on.

    然後我去車站等爸爸一起回家。

    Then I went to the train station to return home with my dad.

    我坐在商店旁的椅子上面等著爸爸

    While waiting, I sat on a bench beside a store.

    看到爸爸從月台走出出入口

    When I saw my dad coming out of the entrance of the platform(station),

    就跑上前去迎接爸爸,跟著爸爸一起回家。

    I hurriedly ran up to my father to greet him. Then we went home together.

    到家後爸爸說明天要帶我去動物園。

    Once we got home, my dad told me that he would take me to the zoo tomorrow.

    參考資料: me
  • 1 0 年前

    嗨!我是Vicky。我的家人有爸爸、媽媽、還有我

    Hi My name is Vicky, in my family there is my father, my mother and myself.

    今天早上坐在沙發上,看著電視

    This morning I was sitting on the couch watching TV.

    媽媽穿著拖鞋從廚房中拿著早餐出來

    and mom camt out of the kitchen with breakfast with her house slippers on.

    看著櫃子上面的時間已經7:10分,該準備出發去學校了

    It was time to go to school since the clock on the cabnet showed 7:10am.

    到學校後進了教室,接著就去操場集會

    After arriving school I immediately went in the classroon then the auditorium for our school dialy meeting.

    集會結束後,老師從辦公室帶著一位轉學生到教

    After the meeting, the teacher came in the classroom with a recent transferred classmate.

    下課時我帶著轉學生到校園參觀環境

    After class I gave the new classmate a tour of our school.

    我跟他介紹了,體育館,醫護室,自助餐廳,實驗室

    I showed him the gym, nurse's office, cafeteria, and the labotory.

    中午放學,離開校門我帶著她到公園玩

    After getting out of school at noon, I took her to the park for some fun time.

  • 1 0 年前

    嗨!我是Vicky。我的家人有爸爸、媽媽、還有我。

    Hi, I'm Vicky. My family members are father、mother and me.

    今天早上坐在沙發上,看著電視。

    I sat on the sofa watching the television this morning.

    媽媽穿著拖鞋從廚房中拿著早餐出來。

    The mother wears slippers and takes breakfast out from the kitchen.

    看著櫃子上面的時間已經7:10分,該準備出發去學校了。

    The clock on the cupboard showed 7:10 I should be prepared to set out to the school. (主詞很重要喔!)

    到學校後進了教室,接著就去操場集會

    After arrived at school, I went to my class and then to the assembly immediately. (集會=assembly)

    集會結束後,老師從辦公室帶著一位轉學生到教室。

    After the assembly finished, a teacher brought a transfer to the classroom from the office.

    下課時我帶著轉學生到校園參觀環境。

    During break time, I showed the transfer our school campus.

    我跟他介紹了,體育館,醫護室,自助餐廳,實驗室。

    I introuduced him our gymnasium, cure to protect room, cafeteria, and laboratory.

    中午放學,離開校門我帶著她到公園玩。

    After school, as soon as we left the gate, I brought her to play in park.

    在公園,和他一起玩盪鞦韆、蹺蹺版、搖搖馬、溜滑梯。

    We played on a swing, see-saw, rocking horse, and slides together in the park

    玩累了就在大樹下和涼亭下面休息。

    We took a break underneath a tree when we were tired.

    直到公廁旁的路燈亮了,才離開公園。

    We left the park when the streetlight, which is next to the public toilet, turned on

    然後我去車站等爸爸一起回家。

    Then I waited for my dad at the train station to go home together.

    我坐在商店旁的椅子上面等著爸爸

    I sit chair beside the shop waits for father

    看到爸爸從月台走出出入口

    When I saw my father coming out of the platform exit

    就跑上前去迎接爸爸,跟著爸爸一起回家。

    I ran up to greet him, and went home with him

    到家後爸爸說明天要帶我去動物園。

    After we arrived home, dad said that he is taking me to the zoo tomorrow.

    很多地方我能不改變你寫的文章

    就儘量不改

    但是 有幾點你要注意一下

    你一下子寫她一下子寫他

    到底是他還是她?

    另外

    你一下子用現在式 一下子用過去式

    一篇文章最好用同一種文法喔!

    你參考看看

    再改一下

    應該就OK了

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