阿超 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 1 0 年前

可以幫我check 一下這篇中翻英有何不妥的地方嗎??

從小個性活潑、熱愛戶外活動及接觸人群、對於新鮮特殊的人、事、物總是充滿著好奇及衝勁、這也立下了日後朝向業務工作的志向、也因為本身對溝通談判的部份很有興趣,工作之餘也都會涉獵關於說話藝術及技巧方面的書籍。而與長輩、主管對談,聽取他們的經驗和管理方式是我樂此不疲的生活習慣,此外永保樂觀態度及正面的思考模式更是我一向秉持的人生觀,所以在面對任何的困難及挑戰時才能時時刻刻展現高度的抗壓性及奮戰不懈的精神。

I am a outgoing person who loves outdoor activities and faces all kinds of people,any new or special things always attract me and let me full of curiosity and energy,due to the kind of personity, I deside to find the job that associate with sale in the future,cause of the interest in communication and negotiation, I usually read some book about talking art and skill after work, chating with superiors is my favorite habit in leisure time,during the process of talking I can get a lot of experience of sale and management,besides, I still keep the optimistic attitude and positive mind in my view of life so it’s the reason why I can solve any problems and challenges with high resist compression and industrious spirit in any time.

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  • 1 0 年前
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    I am a(an 因為後面接母音) outgoing person who loves (love, I 不是第三人稱) (the 加定冠詞) outdoor activities and faces (face, I 不是第三人稱) all kinds of people,(full stop) any (A大寫) new or special things always attract me and let me full of curiosity and energy, due to the kind of personity, (full stop) I deside (decide typo??) to find (用seek 或 look for) the job that associate with sale (sales 會比較好) in the future,cause of the (用my比較好) interest (interests 會比較好) in (定冠詞the) communication and (定冠詞the)negotiation,(改full stop) I usually read some book (可數加s) (加which) about talking (去掉talking) art (加s) and skill (加s) after work, (改句點) chating (C大寫) with (看你要加the 或是 my) superiors is my favorite habit (不應該用habit 改activity 或是 part) in (定冠詞 the or my) leisure time,during the process of talking (common)I can get a lot of experience (加S) of sale (加S) and management, (full stop) besides(用 In addition會比較好 ), I still keep the optimistic attitude and positive mind in my view of life (common) so it’s the reason why I can solve any (any一般用於疑問句,否定句,if子句中 不建議在這邊用) problems and challenges with high resist compression and industrious spirit in any time (any一般用於疑問句,否定句,if子句中 不建議在這邊用) .

    參考資料: 我自己
  • 1 0 年前

    I'm a outgoing person who loves outdoors activities and faces all kinds

    of people,any new or special things always attract me and let me full of

    curiosity and energy,due to the kind of personality, I had desided to find the job like salesman in the future,cause of the interest in communication and negotiation, I usually read some books about discussing art and skill after work, chating with elders is my favorite habit in leisure time,during our talk I can get a lots of experience of sale and management,besides, I still keep the optimistic attitude and positive mind in my view of life,

    it's the reason why I can solve any problems and challenges with highly

    stress resistence and diligent spirits in any time.

    幫你修過一次,感覺還滿順的,意思都看的懂,只幫你修了一些用字遣詞,注意spirit要加s,要不然沒加的意思是「靈魂」喔,有加了是「精神」的意思。

    參考資料: me
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