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Once upon a time there lived a mother goat with her seven kids.

One day the mother had to go out to find food so she told her kids, "Do not open the door for the big bad wolf. He has a really ugly voice and hairy paws."

The seven little kids promised their mother and left.

Soon the big bad wolf came and knocked on their door.

He pretended he was their mother, "Dear kids, let me in. I am your mother."

But the seven little kids saw his hairy paws and heard his ugly voice, so they did not open the door for him.

The wolf did not give up. The wolf drank some honey to make his voice softer and he made his paws whiter by putting them in dough.

The wolf went back to the house of seven little kids. This time the kids thought it really was their mother so they opened the door.

As soon they openes the door, the bad wolf ate them all - all except the youngest kid who hid under the bed.

Soon the mother returned, the youngest kid told the mother what had happened.

The mother goat then took her last kid to the place where the bad wolf was taking a nap.

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  • 1 0 年前
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    Once upon a time, there was a mother goat and her seven kids.

    One day the mother have to go out to find foods. She told her kids "Do not open the door for the big bad wolf. He has an ugly voice and hairy paws."

    The seven little kids promised their mother then she left.

    Soon the big bad wolf came and knocked on the door.

    He pretended he was their mother, "Dear kids, let me in. I am your mother."

    But the seven little kids saw his hairy paws and heard his ugly voice, so they did not open the door for him.

    The wolf did not give up. He drank some honey to make his voice softer and he made his paws whiter by putting them in dough.

    The wolf went back to the house of seven little kids. This time the kids thought the wolf was really their mother so they opened the door.

    As soon as they opened the door, the bad wolf ate them all except the youngest kid who hid under the bed.

    Soon mother goat returned, the youngest kid told the mother what had happened.

    The mother goat took her youngest kid to the place where the bad wolf was taking a nap.

    所有的動詞應用過去式

    Open只要直接加S就可以

    2007-12-16 11:37:54 補充:

    第一句Once upon a time, there was a mother goat and her seven kids.可改成Once upon a time, there was a mother goat and her seven kids lived in a small village.

    第二句have要改成has

    故事好像還沒結局要不要在加一下

    參考資料: ME
  • weiwei
    Lv 4
    1 0 年前

    to 阿qqqqq,

    if you have brains you would notice that Grace copied 薇薇's answer. So please make a wise decision.

    (by the way, Grace, when you said you can change the first sentence into something else, your sentence doesn't make any sense. Shame.)

  • 1 0 年前

    Once upon a time, there was a mother goat and her seven kids.

    One day the mother had to gone out to find foods. She told her kids "Do not open the door for the big bad wolf. He has an ugly voice and hairy paws."

    The seven little kids promised their mother so she left.

    Soon the big bad wolf came and knocked on the door.

    He pretended he was their mother, "Dear kids, let me in. I am your mother."

    But the seven little kids saw his hairy paws and heard his ugly voice, so they did not open the door for him.

    The wolf did not give up. It drank some honey to make his voice softer and he made his paws whiter by putting them in dough.

    The wolf went back to the house of seven little kids. This time the kids thought the wolf was their mother so they opened the door.

    As soon as they opened the door, the bad wolf ate them all except the youngest kid who hid under the bed.

    Soon the mother returned, the youngest kid told the mother what had happened.

    The mother goat took her youngest kid to the place where the bad wolf was taking a nap.

    可以參考喔

    參考資料: 我住國外 =P
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