yamacore 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 1 0 年前

可不可以幫我看一下跟糾正一下我翻的英文好嗎 10點

所以為了改善高齡少子化這個問題,我會將會提出以下幾個方案第一個是,鼓勵生育,生二個以上小孩的家庭,將會對他們的孩子的教育費、醫療費等等給予補助金。

第二個是,為了減輕多子家庭經濟及時間上負擔,將會大幅增設24小時免費託兒所,讓夫妻兩人都要在外工作可以放心。

第三個是,増收單身稅,若結婚後不生孩子的話也是要照收,不給予任何優惠。

第四個是,開發全自動化老人院,讓年輕的一代,不要背負著一生就是要照顧老年人的沉重擔子。

最後一個是,退休年齡設為65歲,讓身體還健壯的老年人還能繼續工作,如果退休後還想要繼續工作的話,也要支援他們,讓他們找到適合的工作。

In older to improve the to reduce our living expenses the problem of decreasing number of children and aging , I advance some programs.

1. Encourage Baby Boomers. children Over 2 family, The government will give them baby bonus for educational expenses and medical expenses

2. To reduce living expenses, government will build more child-care center.. the parents can stop worrying when they work out

3. Increase single tax. 若結婚後不生孩子的話也是要照收,不給予任何優惠

4. Develop automatic rest homes讓年輕的一代,不要背負著一生就是要照顧老年人的沉重擔子。

5 Extend the retirement age to 65 years-old., Healthy ageds can continue their work even after retirement

麻煩各位英文大大了…

我實在是想破頭了…嗚

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  • 1 0 年前
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    應該是 in order to 而不是 in older to!!

    2007-12-16 07:52:59 補充:

    In order to improve the problems of the floridisation and decreasing number of new births. I advance some programs.

    1. The encouragement of having children. The government should support the family has more than two children the educational expenses and medical expense.

    2. To reduce the family's living expenses. The governemt should build more child-care center, so that the parents can focus on their works whithout worrying.

    3. To tax the people who are single and the married couples that don't have any child should pay the tax as well.

    4. The development of automatic rest homes so that the young generation won't have to carry the heavy aged living expenses.

    5. To extend the retirement age to 65 years-old for those senior citizen who are healthy and can be able to coutinut working. We should help them to find jobs too.

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