思瑋 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 1 0 年前

英文文章 幫我找出錯誤文法跟拼錯單字並訂正

幫我找出錯誤文法跟拼錯單字並訂正

文章內容如下:

John is a frash man. He has studied in a private university for three months.

Yesterday , he ran at syreets with ugly hair and slovenly clothes. He was late and the weather was

bad . Suddenly, he couldn't recognize where he was. , everything were strange to him. He ran too

fast to see clearly. He was lost.

It was still ran. He wanted to callhis teacher to explian why he couldn't be school; unfortunately, he

found his cell phone was broken. He want to go home. Itseems that everybody like to take taxi in the

beautiful rainy day. The lines were long. It seens that everybody like to take bus in the cute rainy

day. The bus was crowded.

The traffic was awful. What happened in this world?

When he came home, he realy got a cold. Maybe tomorrow morning, he would find. Yesterday was a holiday.

更正方式:

I has a book (I have a book)

就在錯誤的地方後面打括弧更改錯誤 謝謝

已更新項目:

有些地方少打或是打錯一些單字 抱歉

2 個已更新項目:

很長的東西

是等計程車排隊的人很多很長

3 個已更新項目:

最後一句

也許明天早上 他將會發現 昨天是個放假日

2 個解答

評分
  • 1 0 年前
    最佳解答

    John is a frash man. (John is a freshman.)

    He has studied in a private university for three months.

    (He has been studying in a private university since three months ago.)

    Yesterday , he ran at syreets with ugly hair and slovenly clothes. He was late and the weather was bad.

    (Yesterday, the weather was so bad. And he ran on the street with ugly hair and slovenly clothes because he was late to school.)

    Suddenly, he couldn't recognize where he was. Everything were (was) strange to him. He ran too fast to see clearly. He was lost. (He got lost.)

    It was still ran. (It was still raining.) He wanted to callhis teacher to explian why he couldn't be school; (He would like to call his teacher to explain why he wasn't in the class.)

    unfortunately, hefound his cell phone was broken. (Unfortunately, he found his cell phone had been broken.) He want (wanted) to go home.

    Itseems that everybody like to take taxi in the beautiful rainy day. (It seemed that everybody liked to take a taxi in a rainy day.) The lines were long. (And all of the waiting lines for bus stops were so long.) It seens that everybody like to take bus in the cute rainy day. (It seemed that everybody liked to take a bus.) The bus was crowded. (The bus I took was crowded.)

    The traffic was awful. What happened in this world?

    When he came home, he realy got a cold. (he indeed got a cold.) Maybe tomorrow morning, he would find. (But he thought he would be fine next morning.) Yesterday was a holiday. (However, it's ridiculous cause yesterday was a holiday!)

    參考資料: myself
  • 1 0 年前

    John is a frash man( freshman ). He has studied(has been studying) in a private university for three months ( for three month already).

    Yesterday , he ran at syreets with ugly hair and slovenly clothes( He

    wore slovenly clothes with ugly hair and ran on the street ). He was late and the weather was

    bad . Suddenly, he couldn't recognize where he was. , everything were ( was ) strange to him. He ran too

    fast to see clearly. He was lost ( He lost ).

    It was still ran(這要說什麼? 下雨嗎?還是John持續在跑步?). He wanted to callhis( call his ) teacher to explian why he couldn't be school(He wanted to call his friend who can explain to teacher why he couldn't be school on time for him ); unfortunately, he

    found his cell phone was broken. He want( wants ) to go home. Itseems( It seems ) that everybody like( likes ) to take taxi( take a taxi ) in the

    beautiful rainy day(raining day). The lines were long(什麼東西很長?路嗎?還是?請說明白附上中文). It seens that everybody like ( likes ) to take bus in the cute rainy ( raining )

    day. The bus was crowded.

    The traffic was awful. What happened in this world?

    When he came home, he realy( really ) got a cold. Maybe tomorrow morning, he would find(He will be fine). Yesterday was a holiday.

    不好意思

    實在不清出你的中文意思要表達什麼

    所以儘可能只找出文法錯誤的地方

    並沒有幫你更正文章意義

    參考資料: 自己帶過英文補習班
還有問題?馬上發問,尋求解答。