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If I should leave Taiwan now, where I will go and what I will do?

Live on the small island like Taiwan for a long time, I dream of living in foreign country. If I could leave Taiwan now, I will choose to go to the North America and Canada. Why?There are so many spectacular landscapes, it just like having a grand feast for my eyes. One of the most beautiful scenery I admire is the display of maples. During the fall, as the chlorophyll breaks up, the color of the leaves will turn yellow and red and even the purple. Even if I don’t really understand the science behind the changes, I also enjoy it very much. Walking along the rural highways and viewing the colorful autumn leaves flowing, I come up an idea to be a photographer for this parade of color. Not profit-driven but just for my interests. Every photo will keep some wonderful memory of these scenes. When I take a look at those which I took, I am very happy. There are so many spectacular scenes I have not seen .Take the Vermont for example; this area can be seen by car, bike, and canoe or even by foot. Besides this place, I have ever heard another area, The Laurentian Mountains where the maples are amazing. When autumn coming, you can see the color change at a time, from north to south. The shades of yellow, red explode themselves. Interestingly, I can pick apples from local orchards, and drink the apple cider every day like a horse. I think I will catch these images and try to draw some picture on my own. Maybe my amateur job can be a painter, it is a great experience that I have not had. Or maybe I will be a guide after I familiarize myself with these beautiful landscapes. I like contacting the nature. It is a clean place. The maple forest is the scenery which I like most;I hope I can live there for good. What’s more, I can experience a lot atmosphere’s changes and a lot of surprises too. Spring, summer, fall and winter, as the four seasons change alternately, the parade of color would be marching.

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    If I should leave Taiwan now, where I will go and what I will do?

    I have lived in the small island like Taiwan for a long time, I have been dreaming of living in foreign country. If I could leave Taiwan now, I will choose to go to the North America and Canada. The reason why is because there are so many spectacular landscapes, it just like having a grand feast for my eyes (dont ask questions in ur writing). One of the most beautiful sceneries I admire is the site of maples. During fall, as the chlorophyll breaks up, the color of the leaves turns yellow, red and even the purple. Even though I don’t really understand the science behind these changes, I enjoy it very much. Walking along the rural highways and viewing the colorful autumn leaves drifting away, I came up with an idea to be a photographer to capture this parade of colors. I am not profit-driven but it is just for my interests. Every photo will provide me some wonderful memories of these sceneries. When I take a look at those which I took, I am very happy (or I feel a sudden thrill that lasts for quite a bit). There are so many spectacular scenes I have not seen .Take the Vermont for example, this area can be seen by car, bike, and canoe or even on foot. Besides this place, I have heard of another area, The Laurentian Mountains where the maples are amazing. When autumn comes, you can see the colors of maples in different regions change at their respective time, from north to south. The shades of yellow and red unveil themselves. Interestingly, I can pick apples from local orchards, and drink the apple cider every day like a horse (ok..). I think I will catch these images and try to draw some picture on my own. Maybe my be an amateur painter as it is a great experience that I have not had.

    2007-12-26 17:41:38 補充:

    Or maybe I will be a guide after I become familiar myself with these beautiful landscapes. I like to be near (or indulge myself in) the nature. The maple forest is the scenery which I like most;I hope I can live there for good (?).

    2007-12-26 17:41:42 補充:

    What’s more, I can experience a lot of atmospherical changes and a lot of surprises too. Spring, summer, fall and winter, as the four seasons change alternately, the parade of colors would be marching (or anything but ordinary..wats marching?).

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