阿水 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 1 0 年前

懇請幫我改正錯誤~ 幫我看一下文法!! 拜托..

In the poem “The Soul ” represented the selection of companions,

such as mate, our values or even lover is hard to find. In other words,

it is impossible to find a true, fair, loyal and perfect person in the world.

In the second stanza, D writes on even when Emperor come upon her

mat, the soul remains unfeeling. “Unmoved-an Emperor be kneeling

Upon her mat-(line 7)”.

First of all, for a little girl, there is always a period of her dreaming

herself as a princess waiting for her Prince Charming. I am no exception.

However, as I grew up, I soon comprehended that a fiction does not

happen in real life.

There may have many boys and friends around us, but none of them will be a prince or soul mate. The second stanza describes that no matter if anyone is in the higher class or the lower class, the soul will select who can get into the door.

D's poems are close to love and sensation, I think every person either boy or girl must be careful in choosing a person he or she will love.

It does not matter his or her looks or status. Like what D is emphasizing.

I feel that she is getting numb that time of her life with love like stone.

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  • Paco
    Lv 5
    1 0 年前
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    In the poem “The Soul ” represented the selection of 可以考慮加入"our" companions, such as mates, our values or even lover is hard to find. In other words, it is impossible to find a true, fair, loyal and perfect person in the world. In the second stanza, D wrote, even when the Emperor come upon her mat, the soul remains unfeeling(可改untouched?unmoved?但是不可用 unfeeling...). “Unmoved-an Emperor be kneeling upon her mat-(line 7)".

    First of all, for a little girl, there is always a period of her dreaming (when she dreams) herself as a princess waiting for her Prince Charming, and I am no exception.However, as I grew up, I soon comprehended that a fiction does not happen in real life.

    There may have been many boys and friends around us, but none of them will be a prince or soul mate. The second stanza describes that no matter if anyone is(you are) in the higher class or the lower class, the soul will select the one who can get into the door(我覺得可以省略).

    D's poems are close to love and sensation, I think every person either boy or girl must be careful in choosing a person he or she will love.

    It does not matter of his or her looks nor status. Just like what D is emphasizing. I feel that she is getting numb that time of her life with love just like a stone.

    我有讀過你這篇心得,不只是改文法,希望你可以了解我改的用意。有問題歡迎寄信給我~

    參考資料: 12年國外的英文...
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  • 1 0 年前

    Hi 我想請問一下阿富 你是怎ㄇ用顏色來標示的ㄋㄟ

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  • Ahoo
    Lv 7
    1 0 年前

    In the poem “The Soul ” represents the selection of companions,

    such as mate, our values or even lover is hard to find. In other words,

    it is impossible to find a true, fair, loyal and perfect person in the world.

    In the second stanza, D writes on even when Emperor come upon her

    mat, the soul remains unfeeling. “Unmoved-an Emperor be kneeling

    Upon her mat-(line 7)”.

    First of all, for a little girl, there is always a period of her dreaming

    herself as a princess waiting for her Prince Charming. I have no exception.

    However, as I grew up, I realize that a fiction does not happen in real life.

    There could be many boys and friends around us, but none of them will be a prince or soul mate. The second stanza describes that no matter if anyone is in the higher class or the lower class, the soul will select who can get into the door.

    D's poems are close to love and sensation, I think every person both boy and girl must be careful in choosing a person he or she will love.

    It does not matter his or her looks or status. Like what D emphasizes.

    I feel that she is getting numb that time of her life with love like stone.

    未盡滿意請勿生氣

    參考資料: Happy New Year
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