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In the poem “The Soul ” represented the selection of companions, such as mate, our values or even lover is hard to find. In other words, it is impossible to find a true, fair, loyal and perfect person in the world. In the second stanza, D writes on even when Emperor come upon her mat, the soul... 顯示更多 In the poem “The Soul ” represented the selection of companions,
such as mate, our values or even lover is hard to find. In other words,
it is impossible to find a true, fair, loyal and perfect person in the world.
In the second stanza, D writes on even when Emperor come upon her
mat, the soul remains unfeeling. “Unmoved-an Emperor be kneeling
Upon her mat-(line 7)”.

First of all, for a little girl, there is always a period of her dreaming
herself as a princess waiting for her Prince Charming. I am no exception.
However, as I grew up, I soon comprehended that a fiction does not
happen in real life.

There may have many boys and friends around us, but none of them will be a prince or soul mate. The second stanza describes that no matter if anyone is in the higher class or the lower class, the soul will select who can get into the door.

D's poems are close to love and sensation, I think every person either boy or girl must be careful in choosing a person he or she will love.
It does not matter his or her looks or status. Like what D is emphasizing.
I feel that she is getting numb that time of her life with love like stone.
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