People today,are becoming more and more health-conscious and pay
attention to eating.They want the foods which they eat are not only
delicious,but also balanced and nutrient,they hope they can keep in
shape and long-lived.So now,there are many people change their diet druthers,for example, be a vegetarian,eat organic foods,less meat,less fried foods.
Personally,in spite off any foods,we should eat it, we shouldn't partiality
for particular kind of food.Any food, not too much,not too less.I'm not a
vegetarian, I also don't like organic foods.Actually,a lot of vegetarian
cuisine are too greasy,it's not definitely health.Organic foods is healthy,
but it's usually expensive and not delicious.
In a word,take in foods balanced is the only way to obtain health of the
- 1 0 年前最佳解答
個人覺得第二句 they 用太多了
Not only delicious, foods are also required to be balanced and nutrient, as to keep a good figure and long-lived.
Nowadays, people have started to change their dietary habit.......
less meat,less fried foods可直接寫 less meat and fried foods
in spite of 後接著的句子不應有 verb 而要用 noun
原理有點像 although 後面不能有 but 一樣
Personally, we should take no matter which kind of foods and avoid ill-balanced feeding.
Any food, not too much,not too less 整句缺了verb
可改成 It is improper to take any particular food for too much or less.
I'm not a vegetarian and don't like organic foods too. Actually, most of the vegetarian cuisine are too greasy, unlikely to be healthful. Organic food is healthy but expensive and unpalatable.
In a word, taking food balancedly is the only way to be healthy.
- 1 0 年前