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匿名使用者 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 1 0 年前

健康養生的觀念的英文文章

現代人,愈來愈有健康養生的觀念,對吃也愈來愈講究。不但要求美味,也要求要均衡,健康,希望可以保持好身材,也活得長壽。現在有許多會改變他們的飲食習慣,如吃素,吃有機食品,少吃油炸物及肉類。

我個人是認為,不論任何食物,都應該要吃,不能偏食。任何食物,攝取過多或過少都是不好的。我不是一個素食者,也不喜歡吃有機食品。因為其實素食料理大多都非常油膩,未必真的健康,而有機食品是健康,但價格通常都不便宜,也未必好吃。

總而言之,均衡攝食才是健康之道。

People today,are becoming more and more health-conscious and pay

attention to eating.They want the foods which they eat are not only

delicious,but also balanced and nutrient,they hope they can keep in

shape and long-lived.So now,there are many people change their diet druthers,for example, be a vegetarian,eat organic foods,less meat,less fried foods.

Personally,in spite off any foods,we should eat it, we shouldn't partiality

for particular kind of food.Any food, not too much,not too less.I'm not a

vegetarian, I also don't like organic foods.Actually,a lot of vegetarian

cuisine are too greasy,it's not definitely health.Organic foods is healthy,

but it's usually expensive and not delicious.

In a word,take in foods balanced is the only way to obtain health of the

body.

以上是中譯,以及我翻譯的部份,可否請各位幫我看看改正一下我的文法部份!!並解說,為啥是錯的?!

謝謝

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  • 1 0 年前
    最佳解答

    個人覺得第二句 they 用太多了

    顯得有點累贅

    Not only delicious, foods are also required to be balanced and nutrient, as to keep a good figure and long-lived.

    第三句可改成

    Nowadays, people have started to change their dietary habit.......

    less meat,less fried foods可直接寫 less meat and fried foods

    in spite of 後接著的句子不應有 verb 而要用 noun

    原理有點像 although 後面不能有 but 一樣

    Personally, we should take no matter which kind of foods and avoid ill-balanced feeding.

    Any food, not too much,not too less 整句缺了verb

    可改成 It is improper to take any particular food for too much or less.

    以下的我把句子改通順一點

    I'm not a vegetarian and don't like organic foods too. Actually, most of the vegetarian cuisine are too greasy, unlikely to be healthful. Organic food is healthy but expensive and unpalatable.

    In a word, taking food balancedly is the only way to be healthy.

  • 1 0 年前

    …以上是我個人觀點,我的作業,不是大家的想法!!我發問的是語言的問題

    請不要來亂!謝謝

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