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十萬火急!徵求英文高手XD

救命阿~~~~~~~

由於課堂考試需要,要繳交英文的心得>"< (禮拜二 97/01/08要交)

中文版的心得寫好了,但不知道怎麼翻譯(我英文白癡>"<)..

求英文高手幫幫我>"< (不能用線上翻譯那種的唷)

內文:

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總結:

《The Secret Garden》故事是在描述一位生長在印度的小女孩,她的名字叫做瑪麗。從小就生在富裕的家庭,但她並不快樂,由於瑪麗的父親忙於他的職務,而母親花大多的時間與朋友的聚會,忽略了對瑪莉的關懷與管教,只有一位僕人,名為Kamala,在照顧她的日常生活,使得她養成自私、難以相處、脾氣不好的人格特質。甚至連衣服都不會穿,需要別人的服侍。但在她內心深處,是非常孤獨、渴望愛與友情。

當她十歲大的時候,雙親因一場突如其來地疾病不幸死亡,並且搬到他從未見過的叔叔家居住,並在那邊展開了全新的生活,且在很多機緣之下結識了許多朋友和動物,還發現荒廢十年之久的花園,不但讓瑪麗找回純真的自我,讓因大人漠視,而性格扭曲乖張的柯林,重拾自信心,走出封閉垂死的世界,更掃去了克蘭文先生十年來的陰霾,這股愛與大自然的力量,改變了所有人的愛情及命運。

感想:

看完《The Secret Garden》這本書之後,我發現在當今的社會上,某些人有著跟瑪麗相同遭遇,因為父母親忙於工作,而疏於照顧自己子女,也有著她表弟柯林的遭遇,因為父親最摯愛的人離他而去,從此封閉自我情感,對周遭都漠不關心,甚至連自己的孩子都毫不在乎,使得柯林也因此封閉自己的心靈。就像被遺忘已久的秘密花園一般。

其實,這些例子就好像書名《The Secret Garden》一樣,在自己的心中都有個”秘密花園”,書裡面所寫的花園,由於荒廢了十年,在這十年之間,它是多麼地不起眼,多麼地乏人問津,但當你注入關愛之泉、灑下希望之光後,一切將會有所改變,萬物將被喚醒,展現出光彩奪目的生命力。

如果我們也能像瑪麗一樣,發現他們的秘密花園,幫助他們、關懷他們,並為他們播下充滿愛的種子,相信因某些事而封閉自我的人們,在這樣細心的照料之下,也能重拾信心,走出自我封閉的小小世界。

已更新項目:

請問,老二大大,您的翻譯是....用何方式翻的呢?

不是我不贊同您的翻譯,只是這翻譯對我來說太重要了,所以我才會再次問你,抱歉。

2 個解答

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  • 老二
    Lv 4
    1 0 年前
    最佳解答

    Conclusion:

    The Secret Garden tells a story of a little girl, Mary, who was born in

    India. Though she was born into a wealthy family, she was not happy.

    As her father was occupied with his duties, and her mother spent most of her time partying with friends, Mary was neglected without care and

    discipline. Only a servant, Kamala, took care of her daily life. As a result,

    she formed selfish, difficult and irritable temperaments. Even as simple

    as getting dressed, she couldn't do it herself and needed to be attended.

    However, deep in her heart she was very lonely and craving for love and

    friendship.

    When she was ten years old, her parents died of a sudden illness. So she

    was moved to live with her uncle who she never met before. There she

    turned over a new leaf and met many friends and animals in various

    situations. She even discovered a garden that had been deserted for ten

    years long. It let Mary retrieve her pure self, gave confidence to Collin,

    whose personality was distorted due to adults' indifference, so he could

    walk out of his sealed and dying world, and it swept away Mr. Cleveland's miserable feelings over the last ten years. This force of love and nature changed everyone's love affair and destiny.

    After reading the book, I find that some people in our society share the

    same fate with Mary. They are not well taken care of because their parents are too busy with their work. And others are just like Collin. His father

    secluded himself and became indifferent to everything around him, even to his own son, after his beloved one had left him. Consequently, Collin

    had closed his heart too, just as the secret garden that had long been for-

    gotten. As the book title says, everyone has a secret garden in their heart.

    In those deserted years, however humble and overlooked it might be, once it was filled with fountain of love and sprayed by light of hope, every-

    thing would change, all kinds of everything waken and dazzling force of life displayed.

    2008-01-06 17:45:48 補充:

    If we can do what Mary has done, finding their secret gardens, helping them, caring for them and sowing the seed of hope,

    2008-01-06 17:47:48 補充:

    I believe those who have sealed their own world for different reasons, under such careful attendance,

    2008-01-06 17:48:46 補充:

    will surely regain their confidence and walk out of their tiny little world of solitude.

    2008-01-06 22:38:45 補充:

    我昰逐句翻譯,兼顧忠於原文意義且英文要流暢通順,如此而已。

  • 匿名
    Lv 5
    1 0 年前

    總結:

    " The Secret Garden " story describe one grow little girl in India, her name is being named Mary. Family grown in the affluence since childhood, but she is unhappy, because Mary's father is busy with his post, and the parties of time and friend when mother mostly spends, having neglected Mary's care and disciplined, only a servant, is called Kamala, looking after her daily life, make her form the selfish, difficult personality speciality that gets along, having a bad temper.Even clothes will not be worn, need others' attending. But very lonely and thirsting for the love and friendship in the heart of hearts in her. It is at she ten years old for when,it arise suddenly because of each parents die disease unfortunately, and the uncle moving to him and never seeing's home lives, and has launched brand-new life there, and get to know a lot of friends and animals under much good luck, find that falls into disuse in the gardens of ten years, not only let Mary find pure oneself, let because adult ignore, and personality twist eccentric Lin Ke, collect self-confidence again, go out of and seal dying world, has swept one gram of blue gentle gentleman's haze over the past ten years even more, this burst loves strength with the nature, has changed all people's love and destiny.

    2008-01-06 16:20:37 補充:

    感想:

    After finishing reading this book of " The Secret Garden ", I find in the current society, some people have experiences corresponding to Mary, because parents are busy working, and is negligent of looking after one's own children,

    2008-01-06 16:20:58 補充:

    there are experiences of her cousin Ke Lin, because father people of the true love left him most, sealed the self- emotion from then on, to the indifference, even one's own child does not mind at all, make Ke Lin seal one's own soul too.

    2008-01-06 16:22:08 補充:

    General in the secret garden as what was forgotten for a long time. In fact, these examples are the same like title " The Secret Garden ", all have " secret garden " in one's own heart,

    2008-01-06 16:22:37 補充:

    the gardens written inside the book, because has fallen into disuse for ten years, among these ten years, how unattractive it is, what ground few people shows any interest in, but after you pour into the spring cared about,

    2008-01-06 16:23:07 補充:

    shed and put the light of hope, everything will change to some extent, everything will be woken up, will show the vitality flamboyant. If we can find their secret garden like Mary, help they, care and others, and sow and full of seeds loved for them,

    2008-01-06 16:23:47 補充:

    shed and put the light of hope, everything will change to some extent, everything will be woken up, will show the vitality flamboyant. If we can find their secret garden like Mary, help they, care and others,

    2008-01-06 16:24:00 補充:

    and sow and full of seeds loved for them, believe that seals self- people because of some things, under so careful treatment, can collect confidence again too, walk out in self- close small small world.

    參考資料: Dr.eye
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