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Idol adoring 請幫忙修正文法

目前青少年流行將演藝人員當做偶像

At present, The vogue of teen-ager that idolize the entertainers.

有些年輕的演藝人員由於外表迷人或表現傑出,特別受到年輕人歡迎

Some young entertainers are popular with teen-age during their nice appearanc or outstanding in performance.

有些年輕人對他們的偶像瘋狂到令人難以致信的程度

Some teen-ager crazy for their idols during an unbelieveable situation.

只要不影響學業,我們並不反對年輕人擁有他們最喜愛的歌手或影星

Were never effect schoolwork,we have no reason to object that the teen-ager have favorite singers or movie stars.

他們可以藉著欣賞他們所謂的偶像的歌曲或影片來調劑身心

They could balance body and mind through by appreciate the so-called

idols’songs or movies.

但是如果做得太過份而荒廢了學業,就不值得了

But over fascinated that neglect one’s schoolwork,that’s worthless.

學生應該要用功讀書,而不是浪費時間崇拜偶像

Students ought to study hard,not waste time adore the idols.

文法應該錯很多呀

請幫忙訂正

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  • 1 0 年前
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    The youth of nowadays tends to idolize entertainers.

    Some young entertainers are popular with teenagers due to their charming appearance or outstanding performance.

    Some teenagers are very crazy for their idols to unbelieveable degree.

    As long as schoolwork is not affected, we have no reason to oppose that teenagers have favorite singers or movie starts.

    They could balance body and mind through enjoying the songs or movies of their so-called idols.

    However if schoolwork is neglected by over idolism, that is worthless.

    Being a student ought to study hard, not waste time on idolism.

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