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匿名使用者 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 1 0 年前

請英文大師幫忙修改英文句子

在籌拍階段執行管理行政事務.掌握人事物的變化並適時作調整.協助導演勘景.負責與導演及演員溝通.在拍攝階段要記錄每日開銷.對製片報告每日的工作進度.負責與副導演安排拍攝日與進度.要富於組織溝通能力.善於社交.

During photography, line producer executes management of administration in arrangement .Hold all of the person and affair, then coordinate them at right time. To help the director to look at scenery and to intercommunicate with actors and director. To record the daily expenses during photography. Reporting work progress to Line Producer daily, besides arrange the progress with vice- direct. Having organize communicately ability and adept in social contact.

上面這句子是我自己翻譯的,請英文大師幫忙看看句子裡我用的文法對嗎?不對的部份麻煩修改

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  • 1 0 年前
    最佳解答

    During the planning stage of the filming, the line producer manages the administration tasks. He must deal with the varying affairs of everyone and everything, and make adjustments at a suitable time. He should also help the director to survey the film scenery and to communicate with actors and director. Besides recording the daily expenses during the film shooting stage, he will report on the daily work progress to the Film Producer, and be in charge of arranging the film shooting days and progress with the vice-director. He should have excellent skills in organizational communication and social relationships.

    註 :

    猜測本文討論有關 電影拍攝執行管理 (即Line Producer) 的職務。因一篇短文不能只使用 ‘沒有主詞’的句子,故暫時以 He 作為Line Producer的代名詞。

    ‘勘景’ 是to survey the film scenery。

    ‘製片’ 是 Film Producer。

    ‘拍攝影片” 是 shooting a film 或簡稱 filming。

    communicate 就有 ‘溝通’的意思了。Intercommunicate 是個不及物動詞,指 ‘交際或相通’。

    ‘拍攝階段’ film shooting stage 。

    其他修改處請與原文參照。

    以上僅作參考

    2008-01-19 23:57:53 補充:

    To Artie,

    非常感謝您的修正。

    earlybirdabc 修改文章時,總先分析是書寫用或言詞表達 (speech)用,盡量保持原作者使用的字詞,尤其專有名詞,除非有錯誤。

    在英國,雖然工業圈內常用 pre- XX ,… the planning stage of XX 是正確的英語用法。

    Film Producer 是完整的名稱,只是常簡稱為 Producer。

    2008-01-19 23:58:25 補充:

    Line Producers 常稱 Line Managers,其他如 Co-Producers ( 聯合製片) 、Associate Producers 、 Staff Producers、 Independent Producers和 Administrative Producers。

    副導演確是Assistant Director,有時也分First AD、Second AD 等 ( 在此向發問者致歉,也向Artie 致謝 ) 。‘勘景’ 是Location Scouting。filming 泛指拍攝影片,而shooting指拍攝,兩字也常通用。

    2008-01-19 23:58:58 補充:

    文中的‘進度’指‘對製片報告每日工作進展的程度’,在很多行業中 schedule 指一日裡的過程表或計劃報表等,也可指整部影片的計劃過程,通常在 schedule 內可包括每日甚或每小時的 progrss,因而決定 progress 較適當。

    以上是 earlybird 淺見,承蒙 Artie 賜教,不勝感激。

    earlybird 敬上

  • ?
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    1 0 年前

    修正earlybirdabc的一些用法

    During the planning stage of the filming....文法沒錯,但沒有這種用法

    正確講法..During the pre-production

    勘景...是 scouting

    製片...是 Producer.....沒有 film producer 這種職務

    製片只有分Executive Producer(執行製片),Line Producer(製片經理),

    拍攝影片....是 shooting

    拍攝階段.... 也是during the shooting

    副導演是....Assistant Director

    2008-01-18 15:14:04 補充:

    安排拍攝日與進度

    拍攝日...shooting day...前面不用加film

    進度...習慣用schedule...不是progress

    以上是我們這圈子的習慣用法,請多多指教...基本上你翻的很好

    ........................我是打片人

  • 1 0 年前

    在籌拍階段執行管理行政事務.掌握人事物的變化並適時作調整.協助導演勘景.負責與導演及演員溝通.在拍攝階段要記錄每日開銷.對製片報告每日的工作進度.負責與副導演安排拍攝日與進度.要富於組織溝通能力.善於社交.

    To carry out all the administration on staff, equipment, and all relative issues to do with filming preparation. To record and make necessary adjustment according to the ever changing situation. To assist director on reviewing filming site, and the communication between actors and actresses. To prepare daily report to producer on filming expenses, filming schedule control, and the status of the project. To coordinate with assistance director on filming date and schedule. The ability to organzie sophisticatly and able to attend in various social occasion is required.

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  • 匿名使用者
    1 0 年前

    During the process of photographing, line producer executs mangement of adminstration in arragement. First hold all of the person and affaires, then coordinaten them at the right time. To help the director look scenery and to intercommunicate with actors and director. Than you record the daily expenses during photographing. People have to report work progress to Line Producer daily, also by arranging the progress with vice-director. The last point has to be organize communicately ability and adept in social contact.

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