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The Amazing Inventions in the Last 50 Years

All of the amazing inventions created in the last 50 years, I think the most useful is the computer. Computers help humans many things. First, to help humans to sort the information quickly. Let human use the less time to work up datum. Second, to serve the information easily. We don't have to go to the library and just use a computer to look for the information at home. Last, to send mail quickly. If you have the most important data, you have to send it in the limited time. You can use it and send it quicker and more convenient. Thus, if human didn't invent the computer, the world would be massy and slowly.

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  • 1 0 年前
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    小弟我來試試囉:

    The Amazing Inventions in the past 50 Years

    All of the amazing inventions (were created被創造) in the past(表過去50年) 50 years, I think the most useful invention (這要有個名詞) is the computer. Computers help humans(這裡我覺得你用people就好) many things.

    First, it helps(要用主詞) humans to sort the (data不是information) quickly. Let people use the less time to work up (data複數)datum.

    Second, it's easy to get the information. We don't have to go to the library and just use a computer to look for the information at home.

    Last, it sends the mail quickly. If you have the(不能用most) important data to be sent on time. You can use it which has been quicker and more convenient. Thus, if human didn't invent the computer, the world would be massy and slowly. 你這句我不懂你要表達什麼?

    以上我標示起來的就是有問題的,你可以參考一下,

    如有問題你可以提出來討論一下。

    參考資料: a poor guy in the US
  • 1 0 年前

    令人驚訝的發明在最近五十年全部令人驚訝的發明被創造在最近五十年, 我認為最有用是電腦。電腦幫助人許多事。首先, 幫助人迅速排序資訊。讓人的用途較少時刻工作上升基準。其次, 容易地服務資訊。我們不必須去圖書館和正義用途電腦在家尋找資訊。為時, 迅速送郵件。如果您有最重要的資料, 您必須送它在有限的時間。您能使用它和送它更快和更加方便。因而, 如果人沒有發明電腦, 世界大而重和慢慢地。

    翻中文是這樣

    那看你有覺得哪裡不對

    我只能這樣其餘我無能為勵

    抱歉~

  • 呆子
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    1 0 年前

    The Amazing Inventions in the past 50 Years

    the most useful Invention is computer in the past 50 years. it can do lots of things for us. First, it can search the information with less time . Second, We just use a computer to look for the information at home instead of to going to the library . Last,it is very convenient to send an e-mail by computer . If you have important data, you have to send it in the limited time. that is the best choice for you. in another words, if people didn't invent the computer, it will take a long time to do something.

    附記:個人不成熟意見供參考

    1.過多堆疊的文字,可以在寫完後加以重新組合。

    2.需結合文法書寫,有些主詞不見了等,例如First, to help humans ***

    3.上面大大所述,不懂if human didn't invent the computer, the world would be massy and slowly. 即是因為主要及從屬子句,主詞的一致性問題*****

    2008-01-17 17:05:30 補充:

    instead of to going to the library請修正為instead of going to the library*****

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