匿名使用者
匿名使用者 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 1 0 年前

請英文達人幫我看看我的文章~很急>

因為文法不是很好~怕自己寫的文章又出錯!

拜託幫忙修正吧!!謝謝~

I wish my work in house , and in my future . Like designer theyself workroom . My house has two stories . Downstairs is workroom , upstairs is my room , and many cat with me lived . My house must have a small balcony . In the small belcony , I can to plant some flowers and grass . My funture don't like are office worker busy , I wish I can ease drink tea and work in my house .

原義:

我的未來要在家裡工作,像設計工作者的工作室那樣。房子要有兩層,樓下是工作房,樓上是臥室,而且自己一個人和許多貓咪住在一起。房子裡還要有個小陽台,在小陽台上我可以種些花草。我的未來不想要像上班族那樣忙碌,而是在家悠閒著邊喝茶邊工作。

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  • 艾桑
    Lv 5
    1 0 年前
    最佳解答

    In the future, I want to have a studio at home. There are going to be two stories, donwstairs for the studio and upstairs for my bedroom, where I can have some kittens to be accompanied with. There is going to be a balcony where I can plant some flowers. I don't want to become an anxious employee squiz in a tiny cubicle everyday. Instead, I would love to take my time having couple sips of tea while working at home.

    附註: studio 已經是指設計師的工作室,不需要另加說明

    同學的文法要加強哟~~

    2008-02-19 05:31:17 補充:

    有一句話我打錯了

    I don't want to become an anxious employee squiz in a tiny cubicle everyday.

    改成

    I don't want to become an anxious employee squeezes in a tiny cubicle everyday.

    打太快的時候沒再想,就拼錯字,文法又錯.....

  • 1 0 年前

    你感覺有點中式英文耶,而且太注重每個中文字都要翻譯了,說的誇張一點,全篇都很怪。勿怪

    而且wish後面如果與現在事實相反要用過去式。我都覺得我英文沒有很好了....沒想到...,哈~或許你該考慮加強你的英文程度囉一一

    我看著你的中文打了一篇,也還ok拉~你參考看看

    I hope I can work at home like a desinger in the future.The house I have is two floors that the down is a workroom and the up is a chamber. there are many cats in my house,and flowers in the belcony.I wish I could be free to work at home rather than be beasy like the officers.

    2008-02-18 17:59:27 補充:

    打錯~是busy~不是beasy

    參考資料: 不小心看到問題的我~
  • 1 0 年前

    I hope that I can work at home in future just like some designers who have their own workshops at home. My dream house should have two stories, the first floor will be my workshop and the second floor should be my bedroom. In addition to that, I will live alone with many cats. The house also should have a small balcony that I can plant some flowers and grass. I would not want to be a working person who is tight up at work everyday, instead, I want to be able to work at ease while drinking my afternoon tea.

    Story=樓層

    參考資料: myself
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