Mario 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 1 0 年前

請英文高手幫我看推薦信稿!感恩!-3

In view of XX remarkable academic potential and positive personality, I would like to restate my strong recommendation for XX. He has made me proud, as his teacher and friend, and I am sure will continue to do so as he grows in your school and beyond. And I have no doubt that XX will take full advantage of this precious opportunity to make herself a first-rate physician. XX has my wholehearted support.

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    1 0 年前
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    In view of XX's remarkable, academic, potential and positive personality, I would like to restate my strong recommendation for XX. He has made me proud. As his teacher and friend, I am sure that he will keep up the good work as he studies in your school and beyond. Besides, I have no doubt that XX will take full advantage of this precious opportunity to make himself a first-rate physician. XX has my wholehearted support.

    我幫你改了一些標點符號,斷句的地方還有文法。就讓我來說明

    一下吧:

    1.少了 's,還有你那些形容詞中間要加逗號。

    2.你在He has made me proud那邊斷句會比較順。

    3.改了你的句子,因為不順。

    4.And這種連接詞一般來說不能放句首。用besides比較順。

    5.應該是himself而不是herself,你前面用的是he。

    6.我不太確定你的wholehearted,但是只要你沒問題,那剩下的我就沒意見了。

    有問題或者你需要換一些不一樣的單字的話再告訴我,我會幫你的。

    參考資料: 澳洲+英國家教+美國 (我待過)
  • 1 0 年前

    請問,這是教授叫學生自己寫,然後再簽名的推薦信嗎?看起來雖然沒犯什麼錯誤,但是覺得不像教授說的話.... 如果是學生自己擬的,能不能請老師自己寫寫看啊?不可以的話... 只好算了... 只是覺得很多時候,已經有出國經驗,又在學海打拼了數十年的老師,可以自己主筆會比較厲害....

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