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小雨 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 1 0 年前

請幫我修改一下英文,謝謝(15點)

我們的產品確實是可以寄送到英國,

Our product certainly can be shipped to UK.

可能是您填資料的時候,沒有填表符合格示,

......when you fill out your address.

可否請您回傳您的地址,本公司方可替您檢查問題出處.

Could you please inform your address that we can investigating the problem you have describe.

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我不會第二句

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  • KH.
    Lv 5
    1 0 年前
    最佳解答

    我們的產品確實是可以寄送到英國,

    Our products certainly can be shipped to UK.

    (翻得OK. product 加個s吧!)

    可能是您填資料的時候,沒有填表符合格式,

    Perhaps, the information/address entered was not in the correct format.

    另外可用下列:

    * Perhaps, your address was not entered in the proper/acceptable/recognizable format.

    * We suspect that the address was not entered in the correct format.

    * It could be that the address was not entered in the format which is recognizable by the post office.

    ==> You did not put the address right.

    用被動方式陳述是不要強調是誰的錯誤, 只是描述事實

    用 You ..有時候對方會覺得offended.

    好像就怪他寫錯住址一樣

    It could be that ... 後加子句, 也是婉轉的說法

    可否請您回傳您的地址,本公司方可替您檢查問題出處.

    Could you please inform your address, so that we can investigate the problem that you have described. (稍微修改一下)

    希望有幫助

    2008-02-26 10:17:40 補充:

    或者是:

    Could you please give us your address with which we can investigate the problem that you have described.

    2008-02-26 10:25:30 補充:

    so that (片語 phrase)

    為了如此...以至於;以便

    so that..的 so不可省略

    Could you please inform your address so that we can investigate the problem that you have described.

    若只有that: 便成了關係代名詞 ..在句子最後面要加 with才對

    Could you please inform your address that we can investigate the problem that you have described with.

    參考資料: me, me, me
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  • 1 0 年前

    We confirmed that our product can be shipped to UK.

    It could be due to you have not fill in the information according to the stated guideline

    We would appreciate it if you could resend you address and we will help to check where is the problem.

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  • 1 0 年前

    I am sure that our products can be shipped to U.K.

    It was probably that you did not fill out a formal form.

    (Maybe it is because you fill out in a wrong form.)

    Would you please e-mail your address that we could check for you?

    如果你用這一句的話

    Could you please inform your address that we can investigating the problem you have describe.

    那要請你改為

    Would you please inform your address that we can investigate the problem you have described?

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  • Life
    Lv 5
    1 0 年前

    第一句很正確

    第二句的!

    There may be some mistakes due to you fill the form in an irregular way.

    第三句中文本身就怪怪的 所以我改了一下

    Would you please send the issue back to us so we can investigate the problem you have?

    以上! 就是我的答案

    參考資料: YES!
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